I think it was pretty good. As I read it I got a tingle,and it takes a lot to do that for me.But you could have made it a little longer.(smile)
It seemed to me I was re-reading the last story over again (Dr. Marcilee ) Somebody is not very original!
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pretty damn good!!!!
I think it was pretty good. As I read it I got a tingle,and it takes a lot to do that for me.But you could have made it a little longer.(smile)
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It seemed to me I was re-reading the last story over again (Dr. Marcilee ) Somebody is not very original!
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