All Comments on 'The Forge'

hot story, hope you write more of it

Hot story, enjoyable. Wouldn't mind reading more about Geon and Harles.

I too really enjoyed this story and would like more :)

I liked the way you evoked the post-medieval setting with your descriptions and by avoiding modern terms. You created vivid images in my head, and I certainly wished myself to be in the apprentice's place !

As much as I would like to hear more of Geon's life at the forge, I cannot help feeling that the story is just perfect as it is, and that you would be better off ignoring our wants and leaving us with this tantalizing glimpse.

Very hot but also very gripping at the same time with such an unusual time period and setting. So different from the overwhelming majority of stories here. Before I got halfway through, I was right there seeing it all happen; almost a part of it. That is excellence in writing. Hope to see more from you in this category.