All Comments on 'The Bet'

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ErotonautErotonautover 11 years ago
Putting out fire with gasoline

Good job Taylor and Dean got a ride with Bethany before the industry ground her down. Weird that she should choose to adopt Taylor's first name for her XXX work.

GC66GC66over 11 years agoAuthor
Thank you, Erotonaut

It's not odd at all, really. It was a deliberate plot twist inspired by two of the greatest plot twists in movie history: the end scene of Planet of the Apes and Darth Vader revealing he's actually Luke's father in The Empire Strikes Back. It was based partly on my own history, but I wrote the story around the plot twist and added fictional elements.

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