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More Than Words Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/21/12

Keep it up

good story but vry less depth to the characters........................................ ....

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by cliffhanger2007/16/13

Honor, Code and swear to protect them.

I'm just an old hillbilly but I tried to understand it (fat chance). But it was a great story 5 stars all the way.

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by Silencia10/15/14

Oh my goodness...

Thank you for this story. Beautifully written and wonderfully compelling, I couldn't tear myself away from it even if I wanted to. And I am very glad to see you have many more stories I can enjoy XD

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by bruce2208/19/15

Smoothly done

Turning out to be the hidden master is tear-jerking, but fun!

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