All Comments on 'Sue Has a New Haircut'

by Tzara

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
5ed

i can hardly wait to see what tazz has to say, screw 'em

A REPAST FROM THE PAST

what's with the new minimalism

cat got your tongue?

or did you actually read the other thing about taking people off the page?

1.B4

DesejoDesejoover 11 years ago

Sweet. Bittersweet. What every woman - and every hairdresser - aspires for in a new haircut. This is why one must always tip a good hairdresser very well.

'spread like a clean tablecloth' was a risk, but it works.

AngelineAngelineover 11 years ago
Spare

and, of course, well writ. I like, too, when a poem blends the title in so seamlessly. Nice to see you poeming T-Zed. :-)

dogwatchdogwatchabout 10 years ago
The crumbs

Enjoyed your poem. Especially the last line as it raises so many fascinating questions in its imagery.

Crumbs were your sustenance? By choice? Was it enough?

To explore the entire spread with your tongue...

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