All Comments on 'Shower Love'

by DrakeRiley

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
please make more

please make some more?

DrakeRileyDrakeRileyover 11 years agoAuthor
Please Comment!

Please comment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

this is really sweet. :)

DrakeRileyDrakeRileyover 11 years agoAuthor
Need New scenario.

Any ideas?

Mark737Mark737over 11 years ago
Very Nice

Not the section I usually spend time in. But this story was worth the visit. Erotic without being graphic. Romantic sex between a loving couple. You conveyed the emotion between them well. I find it a turn off when writers give characters huge breasts or baseball bats for cocks. You didn't do that. No mention of size at all. Left it to our imagination. Enjoyed reading it.

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