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by Desejo10/20/12

Gadzooks?

Like the idea. Love that the dude has long hair, that was somewhat unexpected. Not so sure about dragging panties (sounds like a full diaper to me) . Gadzooks makes him sound like that weird space alien Gazoo that appeared in the Flintstones in the later years. Now I gotta find an episode to watch.

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by tazz31710/20/12

CHILLY WILL HANDS

strike while the stove is hot, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by ArjayEiff10/21/12

Bard

it has a nice storytelling rhythm to it, timely in the run up to halloween. The gadzooks made me laugh

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by kokshur10/24/12

gadzooks

great old word. I enjoyed this one. surprise ending. fun.

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by GToast08/15/13

True lee horrible

a zero vote


for your

bad poet

tree.

Villanelles are for those with

Functioning brainst

ems.

See? I can fuck up punctuation and spelling as well as you

Can and still

Be taken seriouslee...

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