All Comments on 'Kinetic: The First Alliance Ch. 01 Pt. 01'

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Anonymousover 11 years ago

needs to be longer but a great start..

ResidentWeavil over 11 years ago

I agree

The previous poster is right. This was a very small bite. But a tasty one!

Anonymousover 9 years ago

Story isn't complete you have to buy the book on Amazon

So I was starting to enjoy the story and it abruptly ends checking the authors Bio they say that it's available to buy on Amazon It would be nice if at the start of the story you could of told us that this was just a sample of the story also the pricing for said book on Amazon is terrible £15.99 for paperback or £21 for hardcover.

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

Don't Get Hooked!

Great start, but nothing since 2013

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