All Comments on 'Ind. Est.'

You put a lot of elements together here. How amazing that I can see them now

The best part of this poem is the first four words which is a good idea. The remainder to me seems like fairly well worn cliches. You are better than this.

I missed the cliche-Z ...could you point them out?

This effectively conveys a spooky scene. I am totally stumped the title. To the point where it is distracting. As for the Mathew problem, I'd slam him for taking your poems on whatever site it is he got them in the first place.

mirror the topside of the road way. TK U MLJ LV NV

tell us more Mr Mathew -Project 356creative- thread time baby, be careful though,

contradicting somewhat Ishtat, but this one

cold,

grey wetness.

does look like a no thought

This poem mentioned in New Poems Recommendations, well done.