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Raincoat and Fingers

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by Anonymous

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by HarryHill10/21/12

There's a story here folks

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Police have uncovered yet another body connected to the so called 'Raincoat Killer'. A spokesman for the Mayors office said ...

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by Desejo10/21/12

A major selling point

for me is the clarity. Three stanzas and you have packed in childhood, dating woes, a discussion with a store clerk, the image of the guy lounging around in the coat - and possibly something weird about his fingers. I love that last line.

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by twelveoone10/21/12

5ed

with the statement, i'm in low critique mode

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by tazz31710/22/12

A COAT OR A MAC

or even a poncho thrown over, TK U MLJ LV NV

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