WONDERFUL surprise. The asides, the humor, the situation, the twist---each was unanticipated, unexpected but absolutely welcome. This story is already a treasure and I am sure your next installments will be equally special. THANK YOU.
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Anonymous10/26/12
Waiting for more.....
Great start! I loved that this story was vastly different. Can't wait for more!
She seems to be the type of woman who would make a perfect submissive and will be willing to please her dominate partner.
Thanks for the read.
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Anonymous11/16/12
Great Start!
I enjoyed this story very much. I think it is a great start. I hope that you will soon add additional chapters.
BTW technically you are a very good writer. I read "A Loving Wife" also and thought it was great. You have both a good imagination and good skills to convey that imagination.
I hope you will keep writing!
BTW2 Your husband is very lucky, wish my wife had half of your imagination.
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Anonymous02/25/13
Looking forward to the next chapter. Excellent start.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Excellent start.
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Anonymous04/13/13
A unique voice
Second story of yours that I've read. You have the first person narrative style down pat. You have a unique and original voice and I want to read more. Erotic and mysterious. Events flow nicely but the style is at the same time a little choppy, reflecting perhaps her uncertainty. It is all so natural, too, and draws the reader in. You deserve much higher scores than you've been getting. I think that reflects the tastes of the average lit reader much more than the quality of your writing. Bravo.
English
Not erotic
Not 'Loving Wives.' Not an actual story of any kind. Not interesting. Not badly written gets you the only * I'm giving it.
Very erotic
Definitely 'Loving Wives.' It's an actual story. Very interesting. Very well written gets you the ***** I'm giving it.
IS THIS AN AUTO-BIO
the story could be chapters in a how-to or sex manual on how to meet swinging couples as a one. TK U MLJ LV NV
This story was a
WONDERFUL surprise. The asides, the humor, the situation, the twist---each was unanticipated, unexpected but absolutely welcome. This story is already a treasure and I am sure your next installments will be equally special. THANK YOU.
Waiting for more.....
Great start! I loved that this story was vastly different. Can't wait for more!
Excellent
Granted, if all you want is your bedtime stroke fantasy, look elsewhere. But if you want a beautiful erotic story look no further.
Shades of O
let's see where you go. 5*
Exciting start
I'm interested in where this is leading to.
She seems to be the type of woman who would make a perfect submissive and will be willing to please her dominate partner.
Thanks for the read.
Great Start!
I enjoyed this story very much. I think it is a great start. I hope that you will soon add additional chapters.
BTW technically you are a very good writer. I read "A Loving Wife" also and thought it was great. You have both a good imagination and good skills to convey that imagination.
I hope you will keep writing!
BTW2 Your husband is very lucky, wish my wife had half of your imagination.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Excellent start.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Excellent start.
A unique voice
Second story of yours that I've read. You have the first person narrative style down pat. You have a unique and original voice and I want to read more. Erotic and mysterious. Events flow nicely but the style is at the same time a little choppy, reflecting perhaps her uncertainty. It is all so natural, too, and draws the reader in. You deserve much higher scores than you've been getting. I think that reflects the tastes of the average lit reader much more than the quality of your writing. Bravo.
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