by Tara Cox
it has the makings, but sadly, no middle or end (and no, the middle/end that are there I would not classify as such)
If not rushed, more detail could have gone into the time between her first contact and the last incident. I am also of a mind to want to believe that anyone in their right mind would have heard the "smell good" comment and investigated it, especially when it comes to a "Zombie" contagion...
Still, has the makings
It's an interesting concept, but doesn't go far enough.
You suggested that the testosterone might be the reason that, except for one female with higher than normal levels, only males were affected.
Perhaps the patient could have gone down on her and lapped up her cunt juice before he fucked her and made her pregnant.
This could leave open the possibility that her feminine fluids counteracted the testosterone, leading to some degree of remission, indicating that a possible cure might lie in that direction.
On another point, it is suggested that she would not permit her superiors to take away her child. How could this be prevented, considering that under no circumstances would any of the personnel ever be permitted to leave the facility?
or maybe already is and being hidden, TK U MLJ LV NV
just about anything in Sci-Fi could be a phenomena in the near future, TK U MLJ LV NV
Not as much sex as I thought it would have, but the story is very well written. The details emphasizing the PTSD on patients could've easily fooled me into thinking that the author actually had PTSD.