All Comments on 'New Neighbors'

My advice to you is don't read it but as normal there will be at least 10 sick fuckers that think this was erotic. You'll have to excuse me know I am on my way to the eye doctor to get my eye's flush after reading this shit.

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I read your comment and agree with you. Its sad but there are less than a dozen men on this site. All the rest r cucks and wimps. We are a dying breed. Time and again there has been a discussion to create a separate category for WIMPS AND CUCKS but alas, thats not happening. Totally sucks. I wish there was a solution to this.

What does this have to do with LW's? Plain sick.

I wipe my cholera drool over your cabanaz .This story stinks.

Or perhaps the author could explain where the eroticism is because I've sure as fick looked and I can't find it.

TSIA

id say its time to find another wife...wait till this one is in the house next door and accidently set off a little piece of candle ..say under their couch...make sure they all drink a lot...then burn the fucking house down...cry like hell and then laugh all the way to the bank with your insurance money...sorry im just the type guy whod have to make sure the bitch paid plus her accomplishes...they sure deserve a little pain...maybe a lot...hopefully they would wake up when the flames were burning them ..just remind them to think of it as the fires of hell

give men a bad name.

Take a long walk on a short pier with an anvil tied to your waist, you asshole.

this writter needs help and so does anyone who enjoyed this sick story..

Return to the funny farm your room is open it is the one that said sicko over the door.this is A perfect setting for murder and suicide. Police the brass.

This should be in fetish. What a load of shit. This isn't a marriage, she just looks at the pathetic excuse for a human being as a meal ticket. There is no love here.

Hey Cabanaz.....You sound like a real Gay Ass Cutie........Now drop your Panties, Bend Over and let me get Up inside your obviously Well Used Booty!!!!!!!!!! we can even let your Slut of a woman watch you taking it from a Real Man!!!!!!!

wrong category there is no loving wife in this story nor for that matter any shy woman

I can never understand how anyone finds this kind of imagery exciting. Then again I have balls.

A very HOT story! Please disregard the criticism, and write more stories!

Ya couldn't just say you liked the story and accept that fact others dare have a different opinion? Did you notice THEY concentrated on the story -- unlike you.

Just Awful. I kept trying to figure out why you even wasted your time writing it until I just gave up as skimmed to the end so I could at least relate how bad I thought it was.

same characters and story line as "seduction of Victoria" http://www.literotica.com/s/the-seduction-of-Victoria under a diff authors name, albeit expanded and added to i still prefer the first story by hercuckman

nice read....

Poorly written. Nearly lost interest in paragraph 1 due to spelling/grammar errors, but managed to stumble on to paragraph 5 before I finally succumbeed.

What a sick story about a man letting his wife treat him like that. He should kick the slut out and move on.How stupid can he be to put up with that and have to take care of bastard kid

You can count on getting low scores.

That makes me laugh. 5*

In major need of editing.

Maybe I missed the reasons, but for me, I doubt they would make sense. I had a wife who wanted to sample other men while remaining married to me. When I said, "No" she cried and begged. When I discovered she sampled the neighbor man I divorced her and made sure he couldn't cuck anyone else, ever. Now she can do anyone she wants and I no longer care.

The descriptor for this tale is as CLEAR as it can be! Hubby gives his Sweetie to his neighbor! If you don't want to read this, then DON'T! Then DON'T rate it, and then DON'T comment on it! Personally, I disliked this story a lot, but because I don't like people being 'drifted' into positions they did not themselves choose! I don't believe Hubby was a 'latent cuck!' He was slowly and deliberately tricked into accepting 'faits accompli' because of a plan three people pushed on him. A stronger person would have rejected the escalation well before, but that makes him WEAK, not a 'natural cuckold!'

The grammar and spelling, as well as the story flow were sub-par (but not a record low!)

3* (just barely)

1*.......what's so funny? Seems like YOU'RE the only troll on here. All the others thumbed down this piece of crap called a story, and I didn't even have to read it to know that. Unfortunately " Loving wives" category has gone to shit.

Saved me a lot of time. Are you really a man? Are you really a submissive willing (eager?) cuckold? This story (pages 1 and 4 at least) reads like the author is a bitter woman spewing her hatred for men. Or a man who hates himself. Get help.

The story I felt was good. However, it could have used some editing and been more engaging. I felt it was as though it was being retold and points I had problems with it keeping my interest.

A must read story.

And may i say Sir that you are a excellent troll.

Nothing here but small minded hate aimed at husbands.

What a waste of good talent.

Any man that is that stupid and willing to tolerate that level of abuse, deserves the outcome.....but DAMN! Horrible story.

Next time, try writing characters with some real, human responses.

It might get you trashed less......

And I just wasted about an hour with this dribble. At least have the guy divorce the wife to get some self respect back.

Letting the wife have protected sex with another man is one thing but letting others control your sex life is completely different.

Cock in a cage???Its about male humiliation.There is no Loving Wife here.

Do not pass go and do not collect 200 dollars. This story is the biggest piece of shit I have ever had the misfortune to read!

What a crock of shit you wrote. The first time my would try getting me to let another man fuck her with or without a condom and the bastard was in on it I would have cut his cock off, split her belly open and shoved it inside of her and there you have it inside of you. And if Jacks wife gave me any trouble I'b kicked her in the belly so hard she would have self aborted the baby

Perhaps I am missing something but I enjoyed reading this FICTIONAL story. Okay so maybe it is in the wrong category (although maybe not). I would strongly encourage the author to continue writing new stories, if people are SO upset then they should have just stopped reading. I will admit I found the first 2/3 much better than the last 1/3 but I really enjoyed the writing style. Top marks from me, I hope to read more from this authur.

This is a great story! I loved the way they slowly bring him along and then he ends up begging his wife to get pregnant with Jack's baby. How about a sequeal?

This is a story about a mans coming to terms with his wife cuckolding him. If your not into this loving wife/fetish lifestyle then this story is NOT for you. I personally cant wait for more stories from this author. Those of you who bash the author need to just pass on by. Its pretty straight forward what is going to happen here, yet you continued to read it. Your the only ones at fault here, not the author.

I kept reading till the end hoping the husband would finally put a stop to what Jack was doing with his wife.

He didn't.

What the fuck.

All cucks should die.

Had me wet the entire time I read you story. A little lame but dammed I wish it was my eife

I LOVED this story. Excellently written and explored some really kinky ideas. Thanks for posting!

I kelp thinking this dude is going to go postal on this fools. They all need a bullet to the head. Good writing You use the mind control very well. Thats one fucked up dude.

Really love the story. It is Ok cuck haters. I am a cuck, not a man, and i am okay with that, since that is what i am.

Well, I will rate this story for what it is, a cuckolding story, and not for I want it to be.

I do not particularly like cuckolding stories and as such I my biased vote would be a 2. I liked this story a lot up to the point where I realized it was going to be a cuckolding story when Vicki got on Jack's lap the day Stacy announced she was pregnant. Up to that point I foudn it a very erotic story.

I dont like this kind of stories and reading the husband make all those terrible choices was like watching a teenager play with a loaded gun, without the safety on and pointing it at some part of his body. It was very difficult for me to keep on reading, but I managed. And is it just me or Vicki looked like a willing, knowing participant in the cuckolding of her husband? I mean, she was supposed to be "shy and naive" but the cuckolding of her husband made me doubt the naive part, that is just not how a naive girl behaves.

My un-biased vote, which it will be the one I will enter, is a 5. Because it's a great cuckolding story. I would give it a 4.5 due to the major editing needed but I cant give half stars, so a 5 it is.

I would love to read more from cabanaz, preferrably if it isnt about cuckolds.

if we could rate it on two points. the writing and then the story content. that way you would know the real score. like MM does really good cuck stories, mostly, so people who dont like cuck stories can still rate his writing as high but not the content of the story if they dont like that part, instead of just giving it a low rating if you dont like the content.

This guy needs to grow a pair, i can see doing some swapping.with protection...but never without!

Congratulations!!!

Fantastic story!!!!!!!

THANKS!

So his wife has no respect for him, obviously doesn't love him and abuses him. The idiot neighbor takes pictures giving the husband all he needs for a divorce from the slut and a lawsuit for the neighbor? And that's assuming the husband let it happen to begin with. Even little guys have guns. And the cage? Another joke. Trip to the hardware store and gone in 2 minutes. Think things through before you print it out and waste readers time with this unbelievable tale, even if it is a fantasy.

THE WIFE NEEDS KILLIN'

All your tears, they are delicious.

Great story, so hot.

sloppy seconds always best. nice story

I really enjoyed this story and have re-read it a couple of times. Thanks so much for sharing!

I would enjoy this story if the wife and the neighbors were slaughtered in the worst and most wonderfully creative ways imaginable.

crap

this is what so many husbands secretly want for their wives... to humiliate them and make their sissy cum dribble out from their limp little worm after eating the creampie that a real man has given their ovulating wives.... I will always remember the first time in college that my Vietnamese girlfriend first sucked ethan's dick with me... for a while we loved sharing him, but we knew it would end with him fucking her and leaving me... I served a purpose by cleaning up his cum for a while from between her legs and loved every bit of it... eventually she wouldn't even give me a blow job saying that I was a pervert and only good for cleaning duties.... I would still suck his dick to get it nice and wet before he stretched her out

You the wife ,the neighbor the neighbor"s wife should be tied to poles striped and sloewley cut into little pieces . the neighbor should have his cock cut off one 1/8 of a inch at a time in front of both wifes and shoved up his ass .The wifes should have there faces beat to shit then sold to the lowest whore house in the lowest place he could find and fuck the lowest mother fuckers .And get every std there is and die the slowest death there is .The wife is the lowest scum sucking piece there is just for the humiliation she gave her husband I don't believe there any thing wrong with the husband as long as he wants to live that way there should be no humiliation.

This must be one of the best cuckold stories on here. My wife cuckolds me, but sadly we've never found a neighbour like this. Good job!

Why did all you idiots read the story only to slag it off? If you had half a brain, you'd have stopped after the intro.... Duh! It's a cuckold story. If you don't like that then don't read it! But you thickos read all 4 pages and then complain... Please!

No love in this story...only sex and a stupid guy who was caged....

I have no clue why I wasted my time reading this piece of shit story. I would have walked out never to return to the cheating slut.

this is the natural order of things in the real world. its good to finally accept our place as beta males suited only to clean up and drink another man's cum from our wives.

This is bullshit if this was me I would have left her slit ass after she told about fucking him in the first place cause she broke her vow to God not just me.

You are some a ass hole the second she put that shirt on her ass would be on the floor with my foot up her cunt and no teeth in her mouth she would not be with Stacy and Jack there be no pregnant by jack or any one else ,I would beat her ass morning ,noon ,and night ,just fore the fun skank bitch slut then send her ass out to make money make sure she cant get pregnant but make sure she is fucking who I say no jack. Jack might lose his big dick and Stacy will be joining her in the slut trade, happy sluting HA HA HA HA HA TO ALL SLUTS EAT SHIT AND DIE .

You should have smashed her cunt with a bat after the first night so no one could have used it again. Fucking cunt.

Nobody will miss you.

Nice story. It is good enough that if you had asked for an editor on the forums, I think you would have gotten someone to do it. I suggest you look into that next time, because the plot, character, and narrative are all worthy of a better written story.

Also, the only thing better than a nice cuckold-humiliation story is reading the comments from all the insecure little pin-dicks getting angry at the author for having a fetish they don't have. Their tears of anger and frustration are delicious. I'll smile for an hour basking in their impotent rage. I'm so happy they take the time to let everyone know how threatened and upset they are.

Luckily for you there are plenty of guys to do that. What a little bitch you are.

the sexual tension was hot, up to a point. the plot made me cringe, the poor grammar and spelling made me sigh.

please seek editorial help with your next effort. google translate is not enough.

It's a shame you would not be man enough and confident enough to leave her, get revenge oh him and go find a good woman. She was not mature enough to resist a player, she should never marry.

@anbrgr Not to like cuckolding lifestyle means to LIKE FREEDOM!

Cuckolding lifestyle a special pshichotic illness at heterosexual men so it is either masochism or extreme porn addiction types except for bisexual or homosexual men. At bisexual or homosexual husbands the cuckolding are normal sexual activity and no problem with the freedom.

The problem is the average heteroxual readers do not like to read about bisexual, homosexual, psichotic ill heterosexual husbands mainly from the POV of these type characters who live in a special sex slavery.

The exception when a hetero psichotic ill (either masochist or extreme porn addict) husbands heal up from their illness in the stories. (I read two from manninconn and Saxon_Hart)

To portray these type lifestyle as the kink of the author shows an special anti FREEDOM mindset. To do sex with other as the spouse (except for the bisex and homosex husbands who lick the cocks of the bulls of his wives) is forbidden for the husband but the hot wife could be sex with others. This a special Master Slave type connection at heterosexual husbands (exception is the bisex and homosex husbands)!

About the impotence. Your sarcastic words would have been suitable 30 years ago. The modern pharmacy and food addictives can heal up the most psychic origin impotence only money and lazyness question. Not only erection onset medicines are but sperm quantity increasing food addictives for long time marathon sex with several cosecutive man ejjaculations!

A few % body orignated impotance men remained who can not be treated well and to be sarcatic with them is similar to be sarcastic with handicapped people as blind, deaf, amputed etc..........

Swinging yes! Watching his wife destroy their marriage WRONG! He had enough evidence to dump her, but no he allowed her to cuckold him and now she's pregnant Please I know that it is fiction! But I can't stand bullies and she is a bully slut Sorry but I have read better.

Whoever's writing garbage stories like this has got to be a closet queer....

This was an engaging story that explored everyone´s emotions and fantasies. Personally, my wife and I are not into the humiliation, domination and manipulation shown in this tale. However, it was a great story and very erotic.

My wife is a hot wife and with my consent she has had three children by three different lovers. We are raising them as our own. This is super sexy and we highly recommend extramarital breeding to other married women. We also recommend that all married men be given vasectomies, like I have.

I love watching my wife breed. She always looks right at me when she takes their seed!

You are a woman no man could be forced to write this story let alone do it without a gun to his head. A there is no man as stupid as this sorry piece of s__t is.

Horrific woman, and a horrific situation. Why on earth would you write something quite as revolting as this?

That's what everyone wonders about that putrid Ingrams's shit you're always blowing out your ass.

wimpy cuck shit.

Written by a cum dump slut, soon as unloving disrespectful slut wife tells hubby she's pregnant by dipshit neighbor the devorce papers will be served and alienation papers served on dipshit neighbors. See ya useless fuckers it'll take years before you can afford anything half decent to eat.

M ore sewerage for LW

Next visit to bucko Jacks', change locks move her stuff out to his yard, make sure the attorney has all the pics and video. See ya!

No REAL MAN with any self-respect would let other men sexually touch his woman especially cumming in her and when fertile. What a stupid story wrote by a worthless Cuck Soyboy.

What utter BS. I'd of packed her shit at the first sign of anything remotely close to what was going on with the, "New Neighbors". She wanted him, she could have him. Then I'd of done all the financial stuff, had a yard sale, quit my job, sold the house or let the bank take it back, and pack my stuff and left for parts unknown.

First time she wanted to go with jack I'd take a baseball bat to the pair of them, what a pile of shit this story is.

Really wonderful story!!!!

I hope, you guy carry on some time...and don't get stopped by that ridiculous losers wrting stupid comments.

stupid shit

100 times thumbs up

This is a story I read monthly. It is just amazing and plays right into some of my deepest fantasies. Please don’t let the haters prevent you from writing more stories.

Be put in one area so everyone can fuck their wives with out have to look for hookers and skanks. Oops don’t mean to be harsh. Not all cuckold wives want to be shared with the world.

I don't claim to be an expert on these things but I feel there are many places where how dialogue is written (with qoutes or without for example) could have benefit from proofreading.

Content-wise it's great, a nice cuckold story.

The story was okay, but you made the husband character too much of an underdog to the point where I was hoping the entire time he would stand up for himself and maybe steal the neighbor's wife from him in the end instead... The fact that nothing like that happened made me very disappointed overall with the story. 2

I enjoyed this story but wish I was the cuckold this happened to. I have no idea why I crave the humiliation but I cant deny I want it

Świetna historia - Jack ma dwie kobiety do stałego utrzymania ich w ciąży.Moja mogłaby być trzecia ale za daleko mieszkamy a jest chętna na czarna ciążę - w tym roku lecimy na Jamajkę i zrobimy wszystko,aby moja ślubna wróciła z czarną ciążą z wielkim murzynem czarnym jak kruk.Jeżeli to się powiedzie,będziemy latali na Jamajkę po czarne dzieci często ,aż będzie ich siódemka chłopców - dziewczynki też wychowamy ale chłopców musi być siedmiu

More unrealistic cuck fantasy porn for the bottom feeders. In real life, the neighbor would have a hole in his head and the cheating wife joining him.

How could I keep a HARD ON when I was feeling so sorry for the husband... Perhaps you should rewrite the story. It really could have been a good story. 2 STARS.

I ALWAYS GO TO THE COMMENTS TO FIND OUT IF IT'S A CUCK STORY. WELL, READ THE COMMENTS!

Heh stories like these are always 50/50 half of the people think its too far and the other half love this ultimate humiliation. Needless to say I'm on the latter side. Great story 5 stars

This story captures one of the most thrilling aspects of cuckolding my husband - making him wear a condom when my boyfriend doesn't. It gets them both harder than fuck. For other women cucking their husbands who haven't done this, you've got to try it! Thank you to the writer for making this a key aspect of the story - I love it.