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FUCK!!! that was.... shite. AMAZING!!!!!!! amazing!!!!! please i hope you carry on writing this story.. PLEASE!!!!
Wow
Well this just took a turn for the worst. Hope you come back and redeem it.
NO!
This is absolutely AWFUL! Poor Annie! She didn't even get a chance to put up a fight! Anakartine just took over and didn't even give her a say! Caleb can't leave Annie! It would kill her! AHHH! Damn you, hiatus! I don't know if I can take it! I love this series, but seriously!!!
If the Mayans are right...
And the world does end on December 21, I'm not going to know what happens!!!!!!
WOW
The World is going to burn!!!! I am horrified at the conduct of the Vampire King! This is just so awful!
Wow...
How long will this hiatus last? The cliff hanger is already killing me... lol
WHY?!
Omg!! How long will this hiatus be exactly lol..... I must know what happens. I'm kinda obsessed with this series. Ugh I need more
More, more
OMG amazing I loved, loved, loved reading the stories. Need to read about the hybrids & their mates, Karn, Pietro & Brandon too. Hope you continue their stories.
Wow.
I love this series. Seriously spent hours reading all your stories this year. Wow! Do we have an "empire strikes back"?
More please
This is awesome! I have to know what happens next. please post another chapter soon this story is just to riveting
awesome!!!!
Please post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Brilliant!!!!
Absolutely Brilliant!!! Please continue with this story as there are too many unanswered question left over. I have been playing catchup and I now find myself left hanging... is there any other stories after this that continue with this series?
Priceless...
Priceless...what a way to leave one story and start the next.
O!M!G!
My word!!!!!!! U can write!!!!! Awesome!!!!!!!!!!
Tears
My god! i dont even know what to say.
Aw Jaz, you are awesome!
Fantastic end to the story. You should be very proud of what you have accomplished here. Good luck with all your adventures in getting published. I look forward to reading more of your fine work when you are ready.
Publish ?
Awesome so what name are your books published under? I'd like to buy them
please tell me you will continue!
I hope all is well with you I miss reading your stories. I have read all of your stories and can't wait to see and read more!!
My God !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
By the way she frased that kers ,if one repints & dos anoff good deeds thin the kers is lifted & one go's bake to being a vamp.However you only have a human life spane to do it in.
wow
just wow... i had to read that last page a few times & i'm still not 100% i understood it all... wow
amazing!
I applaud your skillful writing. I absolutely love all of your stories. Keep going and please let us know when and where we can get your published work.
Holy Crap!
What a bloody amazing ending to this story.
Wow.
I started reading these series, the night before last and i cannot stop.
Just adoring the characters and how well they are written.
Just brilliant.
I have not read anything on Literotica that even comes close to being as talented as what you write.
Loved the series so far, despite serious flaws
I came across jazcullen's stories two weeks back and I can't help commenting on some of the things that I didn't like: The number of characters finding their mates is ridiculous, it's like there are mates hidden in every bush. Also, the sex scenes became rather repetitive after a while. And I really didn't like the conclusion of this chapter. It feels as if Liam's breakdown and his healing by Reasa were predetermined plot points, and the preceding events were written in an implausible manner just to reach the desired plot points.
Despite the complains, I have been reading jazcullen's works like an addict, so clearly the flaws aren't that serious, and the characters are very compelling. Oh and I think the best series was the one about Dayton. I just cried like a baby throughout that series.
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By the way she frased that kers ,if one repints & dos anoff good deeds thin the kers is lifted & one go's bake to being a vamp.However you only have a human life spane to do it in.
WTH of language is this ?`cos it aint any english i can understand !
Holy Mother of God
This is the 3rd time I'm reading the FTI saga...it never fails to blow me away each time. You are a fucking amazing writer woman, hats of to you!
Loss for words
I'm reading the FTI series from start to end for the third time now. Every time I get to the end of this chapter my hearts stops. So amazing.
You have such a great gift and I'm so glad you share it with us. I hope you always keep writing. Thank you!
Mother
Anakatrine and Gard has a mother?
OMG
Okay so Gard and Akatrine have a mother and when she first performed that spell was when she was a baby so it means that she maybe gave birth to her a bit before she turned into a vampire so that leaves one question.... Akatrine is a growing girl and vamps don't grow older their mom was a very old vampire so it MAY mean that the king and queen can have babies >:3 I hope so!! I want caleb to become a daddy!
WHAT???????
This kind of ending should be like 2/3 the way through a story.............
Excuse me while I go stick my head out the window and scream.............
I'm gonna go check your bio and see if there's another sequel...fingers crossed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Also
What's the difference between stripping someone's immortality and just simply killing them. Seems to me it's just one in the same. However taking someone's vampireness as a manner of discipline is quite crafty but other than that ...
Hi Jaz。。。
Overall, love, love, love % of the way your storyline for this entire series...even the way weave the majority of them....I like the cliffhangers in your stories, esp this last one...like another anonymous, that Liam should feel hatred towards Anakatrine was so uncharacteristics...seems to me vampires and weres have a tendency to want to react by wanting to kill someone for this or that...that no matter how intelligent and powerful they are, most are incapable of controlling themselves, esp when it comes to their mate, for which they are obsessively possessive, even when it's family or brothers.....its unrealistic, for example, that Caleb does not like his Annie being hug by Rafe for too long (even in Mac/Lily relationship when she hugs other men)...perhaps you could do something about that? Unless of course, vamps/weres characters are like that...I did follow Tears of the Fallen that continues from HOTW. I just love the way you project Anakatrine/Annie - someone with such forgiveness in their hearts and so so so magnanimous...you gave understanding on why she IS the VAMPIRE QUEEN... Keep up the good work. The way you wrote, there are so many directions you can go with each of these characters coz you made them very very interesting....@!@
WOW!~
Crazy ending no one could forsee. If she is human, can she be turned or mated and become a were? How does it work. I think Annie should have made the statement of what was possible. Does this mean she gets that time span to live, age normally and will die leaving Liam alone? Poor Rhianna. What is her crime? I guess to let Anakatrine take over? Did her other half share her plan? With Caleb not having spoken to her, there was no plan. How does this solve anything? It creates pain and hatred. Will Anaktatrine say what her reason for doing so was? What was the point of this 'justice'. Wasn't she the one who said they didn't need a queen anymore, but then she just took over and used her powers to be judge jury and executioner. Is it a word of warning to the European covens? I'm unsure what the point all is. I pity Annie and I think Caleb needs to take some blame bc he was so intractable that he forced annie's hand to turn to her other side to take over, clearly not knowing her plan?
mind-blowing ending. glad I was behind now, b/c I don't have to wait for the next story!
Poor annie will be treated like a stranger by all. I'm worried about her. I don't see Caleb protecting her sadly. We shall see. Sounds like there is lots of pain to go around and I can't imagine the future of all our favorite characters. . crazy crazy crazy!
Sadly, who died from Liam's break??
wonderful
i am so glad i found your stories late
i don't have to wait with baited breath for the next chapter !
jaz you are a great author, your characters are so real that you bring us joy, sadness, complete shock and disbelief
i fully expect your books to be #1 bestsellers and people to be queuing at midnite once the date of your releases are published :)
totally enamoured fan kat
A late reader
I found your stories last week. I got started reading and could not stop. A great story. Thank you.
Chilling
I too just began reading your stories in the last week or so. They are all very good, but this last chapter was just chilling.
Excellent
Yep, oh this is gonna be cool 😎
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