All Comments on '300'

by Mariehaynes

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wordJunkiewordJunkieover 11 years ago
A little goes a long way...

Liked it -- fun and playful...I shy away from the sturm and drang. I like short takes too. Keep it up! Thanks and take care...hcl

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Question?

First of all, very well written, second, first you call him Steven and then Marcus? Is it just a weird typo or am I not understanding something?

MariehaynesMariehaynesover 11 years agoAuthor
crap

Weird typo on the name change. My Bad!!! I deserve punishment!! Sorry all!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
300 blows?

Such extremes turn me off. All I can think about is how is Wanda not horrendously bruised and in need of pain killers and some serious medical attention! I like to be spanked, but when I read stories that describe extreme amounts of "punishment" delivered in a short time frame, it seems like the first two words in "safe, sane, and consensual" are not part of the equation. (But hey, for all I know there are subs out there IRL--perhaps this author-- who enjoy such extremes and can somehow take them without needing the ER. )

MariehaynesMariehaynesover 11 years agoAuthor

Thank you for your comment, however, I feel it important to remember that Spankings (punishment) can vary in intensity. A person can certainly take 300 spankings without physical damage depending upon the intensity and manner of delivery. Also, I write fiction. Which this story certainly is. Please, do not confuse anything I write with reality. In the world of fiction, all ends happily and there is never an unintentional bruise or a wet spot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
proofread?

Is the guy's name stephen or marcus? And she is wearing a bathroom and not a robe.

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