All Comments on 'Before the Switch'

alot of guys get off on the girl girl but she cheated. Hope he finds out and divorces her goodbye.

have a nice live.

Cheating is cheating is cheating. Whether with another man, another woman, a dog, a horse....

Certainly was hot, and while I am not of the opinion that it ends a perfectly good marriage, I think you need to go to chapter 2 and make sure she tells her husband about her one time cheat...I am not to fond of either lady, her friend and her both betrayed David's trust....I think that betrayal of trust should be the focus of the next chapter....then you could build another story about how they all work it out...of course that is just me...if I could write I would but since I can't I can only hope you don't make David a wimp and don't allow the marriage to crash and burn...but that you do bring on some consequences for the betrayal by both of them.

Ok, anon. we get it. You're still jacking off to Mittens and can't get over the fact that he lost. Maybe you should seek professional help. Oh, and good story btw. :-)

Are different from men's. Not less interesting or sensual, just different. You don't really want to humiliate someone you love, you just want to titilate yourself with the thought.

and maybe enjoy and participate, TK U MLJ LV NV

The characters are not well-established by the time any 'action' starts, and it starts poorly, and then 'ends' in an unlikely fashion. Weak!

The concept and (for the most part) writing are very good. I do wish you’d taken more time in proofreading and editing. The switch from past to present tense, then back to past, is disruptive to the flow, and there are some basic spelling and grammatical errors that could have been cleaned up before publishing. If you’d taken the time to do that it would have been an excellent story. As it is, I consider it good.

So she's the cheating whore instead of her husband.