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Before the Switch

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/13/12

regardless she cheated

alot of guys get off on the girl girl but she cheated. Hope he finds out and divorces her goodbye.

have a nice live.

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by Anonymous11/13/12

Hopefully, a smart husband that kicks her cheating ass to the curve.

Cheating is cheating is cheating. Whether with another man, another woman, a dog, a horse....

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by m48gunner11/13/12

Well

Certainly was hot, and while I am not of the opinion that it ends a perfectly good marriage, I think you need to go to chapter 2 and make sure she tells her husband about her one time cheat...I am not to fond of either lady, her friend and her both betrayed David's trust....I think that betrayal of trust should be the focus of the next chapter....then you could build another story about how they all work it out...of course that is just me...if I could write I would but since I can't I can only hope you don't make David a wimp and don't allow the marriage to crash and burn...but that you do bring on some consequences for the betrayal by both of them.

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by Anonymous11/13/12

Jesus Rolerblading Christ

Ok, anon. we get it. You're still jacking off to Mittens and can't get over the fact that he lost. Maybe you should seek professional help. Oh, and good story btw. :-)

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by JonATaylor11/13/12

Women's Fantasies

Are different from men's. Not less interesting or sensual, just different. You don't really want to humiliate someone you love, you just want to titilate yourself with the thought.

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by tazz31711/13/12

TRY IT YOU'LL LIKE IT

and maybe enjoy and participate, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Lickideesplit11/14/12

Weak, but hot in spots

The characters are not well-established by the time any 'action' starts, and it starts poorly, and then 'ends' in an unlikely fashion. Weak!

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