Unfortunately, the authors stories written in German are not free of mistakes but his English seems well below the level abvisable for creative writing. Vocabulary mistakes finally result in a rather strange relationship of the author's main charakter to his key, i.e. the meaning of 'longing for' is completely different from what the auther wants to say. This and grammar mistakes add to something which is far from being a recommendable story.
Please stop your attempts to write in English!
English
Heaps of Mistakes
Unfortunately, the authors stories written in German are not free of mistakes but his English seems well below the level abvisable for creative writing. Vocabulary mistakes finally result in a rather strange relationship of the author's main charakter to his key, i.e. the meaning of 'longing for' is completely different from what the auther wants to say. This and grammar mistakes add to something which is far from being a recommendable story.
Please stop your attempts to write in English!
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