All Comments on 'My Mother's Revenge'

I'm so glad that Kara got the revenge she wanted and Nick got to fuck his mother and is going to be her lover.

Just fucking fantastic..

Thanks for the read

Hi,

I enjoyed stroking my cock while reading your erotic story. It brought back sweet memories of my wonderful sexual fun with my mother-in-law. Although I haven't had the pleasure of fucking my mom, I have fucked Sarah, my mother-in-law, for a number of years before she died. She was terrific in bed. A lot like Kara was with Nick!!! Sometime I'll tell you how it got started - not the same as with you.

By the way, are you Nick or are you Kara? The story sounds like real life and makes me think you experienced it, much like I did with my amazing Sarah. After hearing about where you fit in, I'll have to reread it and enjoy it even more than before.

I'd love to receive your emails that you mention on your profile page. And do you send out a notice when your next story is being posted? If so, I'd greatly appreciate getting that email too, so I don't miss any of your new stories. Thank you very much.

My cock is back to it soft, limp position, but had a wonderful time being hard and climaxing a little time ago!!! Thank you for your assistance!!!

Love, Art

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Whenever I see a new story posted by lovecraft68, I know that I'm in for a good long read. I look forward to a hot story without annoying spelling and grammar mistakes. I wasn't disappointed with this story. It was a great read and I had a nice cum at the end. Keep it up!

This story was outstanding...very hot.

I don't usually go in for revenge stories but this one was great! Please keep writing

Just finished reading your Mother's Revenge story and it is the best incest story I have read here on Literotica. Great job. A sequel would be nice.

I HAVE LOOK AT MOST OF YOUR STORIES, THIS IS A GOOD ONE. NOT TO SAY THE REST ARE BAD. I LIKED START THE OLD MAN WAS AN ASSHOLE AND YOU KEPT HIM THAT WAY. NAIL THE BASTARD IN PART 2. NOW I CAN SAY YOU HAVE A REAL FAN THANK YOU

That would lite up anybodys fire. I would love to have a shot at a woman like that! You have written an outstanding story!

going to check out your others. :)

in praising this story. It is simply the best account of Mother/Son incest I have ever read. Very believable story line and very erotic. 5 stars all the way!

Another great story loved it

Damn, it was so hot!! I just loved it. You could feel the andst in Kara and the transformation in Nick. All in all, a fantastic read. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work. ^__^

awesome story. Keep going on this one. Loved reading it and even though im not attracted to my family i really liked this.

Maybe a little unbelievable she jumped him so quick, but a great story of sex and mom /son love, and who knows what one would do in real life situations, we react diff in sex .love, lust and revenge

mom and sex sex is so vry hot that is for sure

Please learn the difference. Stop putting "laying" when you mean "lying".

Why would she film let alone send such volatile revenge sex to her husband? That one video of her and her son would be way more damaging to her and Nick then any of the videos of the cheating husband. I think the best way of you to remedy this is to write a sequel and have them get their revenge, in person, in front of the husband, after the divorce. That's a win, win.

Thanks for the story.

I agree with the previous comment that the revenge should take place after the divorce is final. There's no telling how irrational he might be and decide to let his pride go by the wayside and bring that video to court.

Nick should also be a willing party to making the video, and it should be while he makes love to her instead of just fucking her. That would show Joey what a real man does with the woman he loves and the increased satisfaction they both get from a loving coupling.

Hot story, revenge certainly is sweet! I liked this.

As usual, a great story. A situation presenting an opportunity One like minded individuals would more than welcome.

as a mom/son writer as well i enjoyed this story thanks for adding it so other could enjoy keep writing keeping having fun

Loved the story would like to see more the sex was fantastic the story was great, and your right was better then most on here, so I'm not going to complain.

That would be the icing on this story. Now you have me in suspence. Keep up the good work, still.

True love is your best work.don't listen to those who tell you otherwise

I loved the story! love and great sex. A follow-up might just be the thing.

Several errors; punctuation, dropped letters, wrong words, grammar. Other than that a fun read.

Stupid story!

i've didn't actually read entire story right now... i've did read most

entire story - on&off here+there on&off...outta the what i've did read

being from entire story - bravo + encore & phenomenal + hurry with more

More please. I can see a sequel to this!

Loved it, would like to read about the upcoming shower, and possibly what goes on during the divorce trial and after!

Outstanding....there is a lot of opportunity too keep sticking to dad. Go forward with the storyline and for those anonymous readers who wouldn't know a good story if read one...please ignore there comments.

Sexy enough but just a couple of points. Going from Pussy, to Ass, to Pussy again without cleaning is crazy, just asking for Toxic Shock syndrome,. sending video to the husband, takes away all privacy concerns and makes excellent evidence of Incest, enough to send both to prison

another great story. but curious what would really happen if video was sent to husband...

It sounds like time for Aunty to come visit too?

sweet

If she really wants to get back at her soon to be ex, then she should let her son knock her up...filming it and showing her ex her babybump!!!

I agree with anon if they send the vid all the husband has to do is show it to the cops and sudenly both mom and son are serving a minimum of two years in prison however she should send it edited to hide the sons face and not splice out his voice

So like I said, I pretty much just cut loose on this one. Now in most of my work especially SWB, I am praised for attention to detail. I know full well the repercussions of that video and came close to doing something a little different. Then I said 'what the hell?" for once I want to be irresponsible! Thank you all for your opinions and comments, always appreciated! LC68

Nothing I haven't said before LC,, I love it,, another 5 starer here for sure and yes I could also see a part 2 when auntie come to visit,,,

Hi, I loved it! Name's Dana and it was sooooooooo cool! You should write on Quotev if you don't already! ;)

P.S. does anyone <3 chocolate?

Thanks, lovecraft, you never disappoint. If it was me (which it's not, of course), I'd be very careful about having Kara send the video to Joe(y). But heavily edited so her son isn't identified would be e perfect revenge. Keep it up (so to speak). I always enjoy your stories, and this is no exception.

thank you,

from a picky reader

Kara's son loved his mom too much too let dad keep cheating on her. Kara got even with her soon to be ex-husband when she had all 3 holes filled by her son and learned that incest can be best when her son loves her only for herself! Besides his dick is longer, harder and lasts longer than her ex! She definitely traded up up up!!

Lovecraft, you are correct that you story is relatively error free as to grammar and other errors of spelling and ever punctuation.

The initial introduction was somewhat slow getting off the ground. However, once Nick had his mother view the video there were some very suspenseful and edgy hours. And did she ever play her cards right--she must have previously had thoughts about her son since she was "fast on the draw" to get him in her bedroom--by feigning and pretending she was tipsy to even her son thinking she was drunk. Until she admitted she had emptied the wine bottle by pouring it out, I thought he should not get in the sack with her. After she admitted she was practically sober, let the fur fly and get it on.

A fuck that is not completed is not a fuck. The connatation of a "fuck" can mean many things--fuck someone by meaning doing a wrong, nothing sexual except using a word because someone is too illiterate to use proper words--however, sexually a literal fuck means a male and female copulating and the male ejeculating, cumming, into her pussy! Therefore, a fuck did not occur in this mother and son copulation, as he withdrew before the actual fuck finished. It blows my mind that a 19 year old stud, having the opportunity to fuck his mother, her begging him, and he does not complete the act. If they both want a blowjob or a face-fuck, fine; if they both want a shit-fuck, fine and, if they both an F-U-C-K, fine but finish it off where an ejeculation should be finished, in the female pussy--especially and in particular if he is copulating with his mother, incestually, for the first time.

Otherwise the story is great! I do agree the mother and son's action video should be used after the divorce, after she takes her ex-husband of an asshole for everything possible, even his emotional manhood and whatever honor he thinks he has, i.e., bust his balls!! Additionally, he's so pissed at his son he would and could use the video to really mess up his son's life, mentally his head, his character, and even cause his feelings to turn emotionally unstable against his mother. The dad could also make his wife's life miserable, intolerablely bad with her friends, her employer and god only knows how many other ways he could destroy her life.

A follow-up sequel/chapter could address many of these issues, and as we should all be aware, this story is fiction, not real, but the fantasy of incestual love between a mother and her son is an extremely FEEL GOOD subject.

would love to read more of what happens to the mom and son in this story

good hot sex, nicely written-love your characters too-thanks

'F'ing great I've had a few hot mom's but never mine, too bad...

so she gets back at her husband for fucking whores by fucking her son but she is about to make a very big mistake by sending the video to her hubby...he will use that in court against her and bring out the whole incest issue....better to wait until she is rid of him then send it.....

good writing dont know if mom was ever a slut or not or if her and sonny will stay together or not but hot story cant wait maybe part 2 will cum out mom sounds wild hopefully with just sonny i hate when mom fucks everybody complete turn off for me keep up the good work

People, its fantasy.

I absolutely loved this story. LC68 is one of the best writers on this site. Keep it up!

I get it that revenge sex is sweet. Been there-done that, but before email! In real life this would be a really stupid move. No matter how often he cheated on her, if he produced a video of Kara fucking their son - his indescretions will be forgotten. The suit will be transferred from family court to criminal court as incest is illegal. Fucking around on his wife is immoral, though he is amoral, and grounds for divorce - but incest can involve jail time and custody, alimony,division of 'community property', loss of job, and friends, plus reputation. Have your characters do it over in another CH, but planned out and storyboarded so they know what to do when. Mainly to make certain to include everything Kara does with her son that daddy couldn't, wouldn't, or wasn't allowed to do with her. They should Skype it to him live, but never send him a recording of it to use. You've written intelligent characters here and son did not rape or take advantage of a drunken woman in emotional turmoil In Fact. In his mind, though, he was doing his mother who was both drunk and vulnerable and he didn't care. He is well on the way to becoming the rutting pig his father, uncles, and grandfather are. There are no players here that do any one thing for the right thing to do that it obviously is.

She's going to screw he son's head up. And when hubby finds out, divorces her, takes all the assets and tells EVERYONE she knows what she did, she won't have a friend left in the world. How was that revenge? Stupid story.

Loved your story and learned a little history.

Thanks!

we didn't send a tape to his father tho. my boy is also a better fuck than his no good father heehee ;-)

mommy loses everything in divorce court AND gets 5-10 in prison!

Uh-oh sounds like a bitter woman hating Loving Wives troll has escaped from that category.

are most of the negative comments posted as anon? cowards, all. what a bunch of spineless morons. you don't have the balls to use your name, you shouldn't be allowed to comment.

i am, also, aware that everyone here is anon.

Great story, would have liked to found out what happened after

that video would send her to prison. the dad would post that video online and their secret would be exposed to everyone.

While yes sending that video could cost a win in court and get her put in jail but than again maybe it wont cause a mans pride is something that should be unbreakable and I don't know about the rest of you but I am not sure if my pride could handle that much less saving the video and showing the judge in court to me that would be way embarrassing I think I would end up and going ahead and taking the loss while planning another way to get revenge all and all it was well written story

Loved it, well done!!

Loved it. One more vote to the comment that video they both made is too risky. Maybe they should have edited the video so it don't shows the face of the son.

Anyhow

Great story

Loved to read

Will there be a follow up story? I really liked this one. Say yes on the fellow up story.

Ron

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Read the story and enjoy no use to pick out little things like the incorrect spelling of a word. It's not like they get a check for writing these stories it's for there ego and our Sick. Minds( lol). In my favorites and I probably did not work something right or left.

Ron

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what if he is pissed off enough to STRIKE back? the police/judge/jury would love the video and keep in confidential to detail so daddy doesn't lose ANYTHING. mommy is in JAIL...

I got so hard I could cut diamond.

What is the chances you will continue this story? I really loved it

I just loved the way she gave her ass up to him. The end

when he just came all over her was a turn on...

LC68, great story. She sure needed his young cock and showed him what a great fuck she is. Loved how it turned quickly and she found he was watching her fuck videos.

Why were they arguing over who gets the son? Either, A; He's over eighteen and an adult, so can go where he likes, or B; He's a minor, in which case this story belongs on an entirely different site!

Fiction or not, this story is close to being realistic. No complaints from me about this one. A CONTINUATION WOULD BE GREAT.

Language is getting old it is almost identical to your other stories. Every women who screws is not a sex godess and all teenagers are wimps and hung..In 75 years and over a large number of women I have never had one look up and wink at me as in every one of your stories. You are an excellent writer but a lot of your material seems to be copy and paste in sex scenes...

You did it again and you always bring your A game.

Would have been better if he put her in her place and insidted she go to sleep and if she still wanted it when she was sober he was all in.

A super exciting story.

Oh he Is so honest jeringing to vídeos his stolen, the shory should be son ríds of dad to fuck mother

Great story !!!! Love to read more.

Like the story up to the point where Mom seduces her son for revenge on the father. Am I wrong, but my understanding is that adultery is not against the law, while incest is. Fucking her son makes for a great sex story but tapping and sending it to the farther is just stupid. Evidence for his lawyer to use in court after they arrest her.

While poor old dad might never tell anyone, he might get Mommy a bit of prison time...

Great story, really enjoyed reading it.

Don't send the video until after the divorce. Why give him spank bank material? Why give him something to post on the internet just to get back at both of you?

Great story, thanks for sharing.

Love the story. AAAAAA+++++

Hopefully more chapters to come with more videos that the Mom and Son create maybe add the Aunt as well if she comes to visit

Hawt as F!

110/10!!!!!

Have the mom and son create more videos this story is really good

Wait until the end of the divorce and then after (screwing him) taking him for everything possible, sell the house, move to a new town, buy a cabin by the lake and live together as husband and wife.

(8/27/2022) Great story; I loved every bit of it. Five stars. Regarding the comment from oldpantythief below, both adultery and incest are is illegal in most states. But they are rarely enforced if done by consenting adults. Of course, they would be inforced when any kind of abuse is involved. So a charge of rape may also be included.

Loved the story!! Thanks for sharing with us.

Great Story!! I Loved It!! I think It would make a Great movie..

I have read many of your storyies, This one is out of character, as you state in the introduction. In real life, I have no problem with mutually consenual incestous love. From the son's point of view, he ran the risk of emotional abandonment. He ran the risk of emotional abuse. Finally, he knew his mother was having sex with him out of revenge, not love. As he put it "it wasn't right to argue with your mother." Initially, from the mother's point of vierw, she wanted revenge sex. Secondly, she was upset with her son for watching her videos. Finally, she continually kept comparing her son to her husband. In the end, this life style may work for this couple. However, I consider the possible harm to self-worth, self-awareness, self-acceptance, ego and id for both the mother and son to be too great a risk for a spur of the moment thing (call at midnieght). Remember, revenge is a dish best served cold.

Seems to me what started out as a revenge fuck turned into something deeper I can get and understand some people's point of view on the risk involved with this type of fuck however if you really look at it there's always a risk involved when it comes to fucking someone in your family and those risk always included abandonment and so forth me personally while yes is a little out of the norm for this writer liked the story it shows that even a revenge fuck can turn into something deeper when the right 2 people are involved the fact this wasn't a normal story that she normally writes just goes to show that she has a knack for writing erotica stories in any fashion and make it work

Revenge that may have turned into more, but that isn't clear. It seems that while she did enjoy it, it's ALL about the revenge and little too nothing about their feelings for each other. She used him. Also, they could never risk sending him the video he could use against her. Show him maybe, in private, but he could never have a copy as proof. God's story, but it could have been sooo much better. 4/5

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Typical piece of shit, unfaithful dad, nothing special there. A walking cliché for these stories.

As much as I sympathize with the mom, she was given fair warning with a clear family history that the dad would almost certainly be a scumbag. You can't be too surprised.

I feel like this story ended too soon. Would like to have seen the revenge play out and get the dad's reaction and so on.

Also, in the author note there is a mention to another story, How Do We Look, Baby? I've read that and it's a good one, for anyone interested in the cheating & revenge story scene.

I enjoyed it. However, I could hardly call it revenge since in my view the action would have to be a recognizable act directed one to another. She may have been satisfied, but he was unaffected other than being removed from the family. If it was truly a revenge fuck, somehow that had to be communicated in such a manner that it would affect the dad in a negative way.

Curious here, but wouldn't the son and her having sex turn the tables on them from the court perspective?

This is especially pertinent when she is going to use his videos as fodder against him.

Sexy and romantic ! I loved it. Two things though stretch credulity. First her tape to dad could backfire in court. Second, having anal sex and then vaginal sex is an excellent way to have a massive vaginal infection.