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A Caged Bird Sings

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by Anonymous

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by scarf7ce10/25/12

love your style

Loved it as usual. Can we get a buxom dominant hung ebony chick as the Gillian maybe? Forcefully taking all that tight tgirl ass? Off to rub one out till the next time! PS I love ur work

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by thatlonewolf10/25/12

regular feedback :P

i like it! :)
i seriously like it a lot, i kinda was afraid you'd make it (a bit stereotypical) a place of violence, hate and such
but i really like the 'prison', i'm looking forward to seeing more action
both blowjob scenes were insanely hot! got me on the edge
i also love all 4 the Tgirls, McKenzie, Prisha, Clara and Odessa
the perfect mix, especially McKenzie :P

any scene between these 4 would make something fantastic, maybe Prisha and Clara are roommates as well and are known to 'fool around' or maybe a debt has to be payed? or Clara and McKenzie show how much they love each other and don't mind if someone watches (maybe participates?)

once again great job on the new series, really like it and you know i look forward to anything coming from you :P

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by Anonymous10/25/12

annyy

good story!! asiatiquE trans!! best asss maybe other trans bataille with blond for favour asiatique and best trans protect asiatique

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by Anonymous10/26/12

Curious to see whats next

A little sappy for a "prison" story, but not in a bad way. Very curious to see what comes next. Will it be brutally realistic? Prison fantasy? While I am always a fan of fantasy erotica, the realistic type stories are interesting because few authors seem to be able to really do it. It can be scary, ugly and I guess most folks do not want that in their eroitca. But if it is part of a whole story, especially a prison story, I think it could make the story stronger.

My 2cents...

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by Anonymous10/26/12

Amazing

Great story, can't wait for the second part

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by voyagersknight10/27/12

Love It

Can't wait for next chapter

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by Anonymous11/01/12

MOAR!!!

the provided level of material relevant to my interests is insufficient to meet my personal required needs.

but seriously, I definitely want more of this. great start.

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by Anonymous11/10/12

WOW

I love the fact that it is not the normal brutal prison story. The level of erotica you present in this story is so arousing! Please continue this story line. I really look forward to your next installment!

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by titsandwich03/23/13

wow

very good an interesting way to have a prison story but it does kinda make sense i mean in normal prission the only thing they have in common is the prison but in this case they all have the T-girl thing so there more likly to work together. i like the idea of this and im wondering who shes gunna be with or if she just is with multiple people
P.S sorry if i was rambling a bit with this its late and im tired but i wanted to finish reading this story

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by Anonymous11/16/14

Decent

I enjoyed your other few shemale stories and this one has potential. But I def feel like there is not as much character development. I hope to find out I am wrong in the next chapter :D

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by jmw74402/15/16

I like it.

I sorry I meant to hit 4 stars. The story was good.

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by Randee195803/28/16

Edge of my seat.😉

I've enjoyed the start of what you've created. So I've given you 5 stars.

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by Anonymous08/15/16

Very erotic.

I love it. I am a writer myself and I loved this entire thing. Would you please keep writing?

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by blackkittykat6910/25/16

Very nice

Loved the story and hope to read more keep them Cumming (giggles) love ts prison stories

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by Anonymous01/02/17

this was very erotic

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