The title is a litttle misleading and I hope it indicates that this will be a continuing story. The author has created a great cast of perfectly amoral, uninhibited devotees of all the pleasures of perversity and the delights of decadence. By all means keep it going!
She's not a stripper yet, and were was the incest?. The cousins boyfriend knocked up Maggie, not the cousin. Don't get me wrong it's a good story ,but i hope you think the next chapter out a little better then this one.It's your first story, and we all make errors sometimes. Good Luck with chapter two..... . . .....LAROC OF AGES
This story struck so many chords with me, I don't know where to begin. I love this peeing, I love that Jeff and Ann don't bother to wash after sex, and I love how cool the cousins are in sharing a man with each other. Can't wait to read chapter 2!
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Great First Story
The title is a litttle misleading and I hope it indicates that this will be a continuing story. The author has created a great cast of perfectly amoral, uninhibited devotees of all the pleasures of perversity and the delights of decadence. By all means keep it going!
Great start!
I hope you continue with this theme! It has a lot of potential.
Nice
A threesome...that's different.
Looking forward to chapter 2.
Nice story !!!!!!!!!!!!!! But
She's not a stripper yet, and were was the incest?. The cousins boyfriend knocked up Maggie, not the cousin. Don't get me wrong it's a good story ,but i hope you think the next chapter out a little better then this one.It's your first story, and we all make errors sometimes. Good Luck with chapter two..... . . .....LAROC OF AGES
Love the piss!
This story struck so many chords with me, I don't know where to begin. I love this peeing, I love that Jeff and Ann don't bother to wash after sex, and I love how cool the cousins are in sharing a man with each other. Can't wait to read chapter 2!
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