All Comments on 'Sleeping Girl'

by KrystalSpades

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BlueFinchBlueFinchover 11 years ago
Good stuff

Great use of the little things to make the characters seem real and have depth. That line "Uses it on whom?" made me chuckle, and it felt like I was laughing at a joke made by the character, not the author. Keep writing!

storytymestorytymeover 11 years ago
More, more, more

I would like to see this story continue and evolve. Would have liked to know if their had been any previous attraction between the two. Great job so far.

kulcousykulcousyover 11 years ago
erotic

That is a nice hot story. Thanks for writing it simply and directly. Wow!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Loved it. You should certainly continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
O My Gosh

I can't believe she took advantage of her roommate thanks to the date rape drug!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I liked it

Please continue that story. Very good!

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