You Don't Own Me

good

want more of this, iknow how muchshe need that black cock

@Kathy

White bitches make the stupidest comments you do know this is about a black woman with two white men (kinda disappointedly 'cause how many women's reality is two of her dream men fighting [who happen to be white] not often but nevertheless) there's no black cock dummy

Anon

I doubt 'kathy' is white, or female. Just another sock account by the same individual who makes these moronic "black cock" comments for some idiotic reason, often without reading the story, obviously.

Damn Good !

This was a Super good start to this story . I hope to read more soon .What a lucky girl, she ( nameless ?) is to have Matthew and Dorian both wanting her. MORE MORE please .

intrigued!

please, show me more!

5

I really liked this story.. Very interesting !!!

5!

Interesting story I can't wait to see where it goes because homegirl is caught between a rock and a hard place who happens to be two yummy men...lol

Great start!!!

yes

Awesome story, and I hope she gets both men.

dont like the rape part and dont try and say she was willing just because she gave in. dickhead knew her trigger and didnt care when she said stop that is rape next time put this somewhere else.

Well fuck...

Continueeeeee ;)


Epppp I love both guys!

Not into

The infedelity thing.

5 star story

i hope there's more....

If..

You don't like any parts of the story. Don't read it. Find another story. Or just create your own with the stuff YOU want. That's the only way a story will go how you like.
Anyway, your doing great. You can write however you please :) I hope you update soon!

Interesting

Not bad, story was pretty good. Anon who made the white comment, Doubt the first is white or female as well, plus saying white bitches, just automatically asuming its a white girl and that white girls are dumb makes you sound like a fucking ass. Not all white girls are dumb, you really should not have assumed or even said that. AT ALL

wow!

new story?? great first chapter! really hope there's gonna be more! :)

I like it!

*****

Wow great story I wanna read more!!

This was so good. It definitely needs a follow up. -DC

Waiting for more pages?

Good

read, update-Now!

Holy sh*t!

This is really freakin good..... I smell drama. Thank you for sharing

What Can I Say

Well, I guess Dorian really does have it going on. Damn he can make a married woman shake. This is good but I wish it was longer. Some more of their history would have been great and I have a feeling that Dorian is not going to stop at one interlude. He seems like the type of man to get who he wants, have who he wants and make them crave it. Would you please do some more chapters. This man is making me hot.

The

Next chapter, please?
5*****