All Comments on 'You Don't Own Me'

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kathy2b46kathy2b46over 11 years ago
good

want more of this, iknow how muchshe need that black cock

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
@Kathy

White bitches make the stupidest comments you do know this is about a black woman with two white men (kinda disappointedly 'cause how many women's reality is two of her dream men fighting [who happen to be white] not often but nevertheless) there's no black cock dummy

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Anon

I doubt 'kathy' is white, or female. Just another sock account by the same individual who makes these moronic "black cock" comments for some idiotic reason, often without reading the story, obviously.

HoldingStacieDownHoldingStacieDownover 11 years ago
Damn Good !

This was a Super good start to this story . I hope to read more soon .What a lucky girl, she ( nameless ?) is to have Matthew and Dorian both wanting her. MORE MORE please .

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12over 11 years ago
intrigued!

please, show me more!

MzMagicBeautyMzMagicBeautyover 11 years ago
5

I really liked this story.. Very interesting !!!

honeybreehoneybreeover 11 years ago
5!

Interesting story I can't wait to see where it goes because homegirl is caught between a rock and a hard place who happens to be two yummy men...lol

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickiover 11 years ago
yes

Awesome story, and I hope she gets both men.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

dont like the rape part and dont try and say she was willing just because she gave in. dickhead knew her trigger and didnt care when she said stop that is rape next time put this somewhere else.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Well fuck...

Continueeeeee ;)

Epppp I love both guys!

Love4wordsLove4wordsover 11 years ago
Not into

The infedelity thing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
5 star story

i hope there's more....

Barnabe93Barnabe93over 11 years ago
If..

You don't like any parts of the story. Don't read it. Find another story. Or just create your own with the stuff YOU want. That's the only way a story will go how you like.

Anyway, your doing great. You can write however you please :) I hope you update soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Interesting

Not bad, story was pretty good. Anon who made the white comment, Doubt the first is white or female as well, plus saying white bitches, just automatically asuming its a white girl and that white girls are dumb makes you sound like a fucking ass. Not all white girls are dumb, you really should not have assumed or even said that. AT ALL

LovelyLvsLovelyLvsover 11 years ago
wow!

new story?? great first chapter! really hope there's gonna be more! :)

Janez9Janez9over 11 years ago

Wow great story I wanna read more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

This was so good. It definitely needs a follow up. -DC

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Waiting for more pages?

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 10 years ago
Good

read, update-Now!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Holy sh*t!

This is really freakin good..... I smell drama. Thank you for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
What Can I Say

Well, I guess Dorian really does have it going on. Damn he can make a married woman shake. This is good but I wish it was longer. Some more of their history would have been great and I have a feeling that Dorian is not going to stop at one interlude. He seems like the type of man to get who he wants, have who he wants and make them crave it. Would you please do some more chapters. This man is making me hot.

theelovely1glotheelovely1gloover 7 years ago
The

Next chapter, please?

5*****

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