All Comments on 'Accidental Turn-On'

by grayshade

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I loved the story!

Excellent story! I came twice while I read the story! Please write more about Teresa's naughty pleasures.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Cool!!!!!

You should go farther and show us a dirtier Theresa, smearing piss and poo all over her body, including her hair. It was an amazing story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
ooooo wow

sick, o so sick, but wow did I ever cum so hard

sinsational83sinsational83about 9 years ago
GOTTA SAY

I don't generally read this type of story. However, I have to say, I did somehow enjoy the damn story. I could almost envision the whole thing as seeing it happen. Regardless of the subject matter of the story. it was a story that was quite well written. I don't know if that say's to me that I have a sick mind or a great imagination but wtf. anyway again I say it is a pretty good story.

ScorePeeOhScorePeeOhabout 8 years ago
No accident!

A TOTAL turn-on. So well-written and so SEXY...even moreso because one can see just how intelligent the writer is. The sexiest part of your body is your mind and grayshade, your mind is so...fucking...HOT! thank you and more please! :p

Adrian69702006Adrian69702006over 7 years ago
Good story

Good story. I enjoyed it enormously.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Wonderful. Fantastic story. Beautifully written.

Never underestimate the power of poo. If you've never tried it, you're missing some incredible orgasms!

Thank you for writing this. Please write more on this topic. I Love it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The five most beautiful, most loving, most poetic, most romantic, most sensual and the absolute HOTTEST five words ever put together in the English language were inserted in this brilliant writing by this brilliant writer:

"I could live on this."

OMMFG!!!!!

TimpooTimpooabout 1 year ago

Nice dirty tale turning from an accident to full on enjoyment of poop. I enjoyed the tale immensely

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Absolutely, disgustingly hot and sexy.

JackiemichelleJackiemichelle9 months ago

Great story. I use the shower to go to the bathroom. Love the taste and eating off the shower floor

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This has given me more orgasms than anything in my life, regardless of subject. The scene where Jazz is imploring Theresa to let her in, comforting and encouraging Theresa to let her help, to let her share is a thing of beauty, much like poetry, and far more intimate and more provocative than ANYTHING Shakespeare ever wrote or tried to write. And it isn’t even a lesbian story —- it’s a love story, with Jazz whispering and panting at the door, scratching on it ( what an inspired and inspiring piece of writing THAT is!!it’s even MORE Shakespearean than Shakespeare), it’s two oversexed and wildly overheated animals looking for a way to share their need and their hunger, and their bodies, inside and out. There are soooooooooo many ways their love and their relationship can be and SHOULD be broadened and extended and expanded. I know it’s been a very long time since you last painted these characters, but PLEASE give us more!! Pump it directly into our mouths!!!!! PLEASE? Feed us?

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