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Peking 1900 Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by meh491210/28/12

Great First Chapter

I loved it and can't wait to read more.

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by deJay_1307/26/13

Editing

Please obtain the services of a good editor and grammarian. You are too good a storyteller to allow minor word and grammar problems to diminish an excellent talent.
de Jay

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