like most authors you cannot get lie and lay right.
laid must have a noun after it
lie lay lain lying
lay laid laid laying---must be followed by a noun
hope this helps.
and delicious. A real treasure. A perfect portrait of tender loving care. Maybe should be read before this newbie's 2nd story "Kept." But no matter, both are must reads for the romance fan.
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lovely
lovely, simply lovely.
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like most authors you cannot get lie and lay right.
laid must have a noun after it
lie lay lain lying
lay laid laid laying---must be followed by a noun
hope this helps.
Best story yet! I love how graphic and real it is...so turned on!!
Fabulous!
You have real talent! Please keep writing, a perfect blend of erotism and feelings.
Gorgeous
Just gorgeous. I love this.
Delectable...
and delicious. A real treasure. A perfect portrait of tender loving care. Maybe should be read before this newbie's 2nd story "Kept." But no matter, both are must reads for the romance fan.
Thanks, take care and be well -- hcl
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