It's amazing that you can create characters in such a short piece,create the sense of longing and desire. Bravo!
leads to a short stop and quick finish, TK U MLJ LV NV
Life is good, being loved is better!
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Very Good!
It's amazing that you can create characters in such a short piece,create the sense of longing and desire. Bravo!
THE LONG TIME GONE SYNDROME
leads to a short stop and quick finish, TK U MLJ LV NV
It is good that they were both glad he was home again
Life is good, being loved is better!
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