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demure101demure101over 11 years ago
Lovely, this one -

It instils a very tranquil mood - Thank you!

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
i wonder

if this wouldn't be better without

Side by side;

Skin on skin;

One on one;

esp. as lead offs

5ed btw

since that plastic spoon line i've been interested in your writing

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE ELDER COUPLES

relive their past in the present, TK U MLJ LV NV

njoyjadenjoyjadeover 11 years agoAuthor
Thank you :)

I appreciate feedback and suggestions. I must give credit to Desejo. This was the result of her words from the five senses challenge.

DesejoDesejoover 11 years ago

Really lovely. I must get back to the 5 senses challenge - when it works, it really works. This one really works :)

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