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gotranegotraneover 11 years ago
Nice Story!

Nice story about every red-blooded American Male's & a lot of Female's fantasy. The only problems, per se': A- A bit of the "I" disease: "I did this", "I did that" B- A lack of intamacy between them, when they first started making out. It was more of a "Slam, Bam, Thank You, Ma'am!" , attitude. Then, again, maybe they got those out of the way before they came to put on a show for you, and us! They could have, at least, greeted each other with a kiss and hug, when they first met in the story. Well, anywho, good story. I'd like to see you write a sequel, or two, or, possibly a series. Maybe, even, a "Katy & 'Friends' Reunion", with Courtney Cox and Lisa Kudrow?!

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