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Double-Valenced Vixen

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by Anonymous

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by demure10110/28/12

Fine start -

Had to find out about the polychloroprene bit. For me rubber would have worked just as well...

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by twelveoone10/28/12

disagree

with demure
polychloroprene plays well against valance,
and this ends EXACTLY where it should
"with the breath of heaven,"
rofl
5ed
still laughing

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by HarryHill10/28/12

There should be a thread

just to explain titles n poems
Where the hell do valences fit in ....chemestry or window dressings?

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by tazz31710/29/12

WHAT A WAY TO PROMOTE SAFE SEX

does each partners desire the same. TK U MLJ LV NV

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