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one morning, between spaces of time

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by demure10110/28/12

Thank you -

Something to reread.

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by twelveoone10/28/12

5ed

out of curiosity can you justify the word "precise" as in "precise moment," rhetorical question. just wondering.

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by Scheherazade7310/28/12

precise

@twelveoone: I uses "precise" as a juxtaposition between the impossibility of assigning it any time value...it is, after all, nonexistent...and the reality of feeling it and experiencing it as if it's happening in real time. If that makes sense. I probably do it a disservice trying to explain it.

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by Scheherazade7310/28/12

use, not uses...

heavens.

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by twelveoone10/28/12

just a pattern

a sonic pattern
pretend I don't notice.
I miss that precise moment,
that phantom pain.
i was just wondering how conscious it was

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by Scotsman6910/31/12

This is so good it hurts

Thank you

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by Anonymous11/27/12

*****

Five.

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