Good story, wife should get serious and take it up another notch.
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Anonymous10/31/12
Great Subject Matter
Outstanding example of a blosooming femdom marriage. You're really good at expressing the wife's feelings and her newfound power. I also liked the fact that you even mentioned the footwear. Many author's reveal what the dominate woman is wearing on her torso and just mention stockings without footwear. Thus most dominatrixes are walking around in stockings which doesn't make much sense. Please keep writing and I'm hoping to read more from you on the same subject.
You know I'm not big on femdom stories, but you certainly made it seem more compelling.I don't believe in just stroking someone's ego, so I really mean that, I'm not easily impressed. Your stories just keep getting better from the few that I have read.I usually prefer supernatural or what some call magical realism in my stories, but sometimes I do like to get back to earth stories :)
A good start
Good story, wife should get serious and take it up another notch.
Great Subject Matter
Outstanding example of a blosooming femdom marriage. You're really good at expressing the wife's feelings and her newfound power. I also liked the fact that you even mentioned the footwear. Many author's reveal what the dominate woman is wearing on her torso and just mention stockings without footwear. Thus most dominatrixes are walking around in stockings which doesn't make much sense. Please keep writing and I'm hoping to read more from you on the same subject.
Loved it. I like the humor in it.
Before I read further I have to comment
The first sentence gave me an erection.
Surprisingly Interesting
You know I'm not big on femdom stories, but you certainly made it seem more compelling.I don't believe in just stroking someone's ego, so I really mean that, I'm not easily impressed. Your stories just keep getting better from the few that I have read.I usually prefer supernatural or what some call magical realism in my stories, but sometimes I do like to get back to earth stories :)
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