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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone10/29/12

5ed

of course
missed you, your writing, the tipping line. nothing about this is
askew.
perfect balance, i guess if i had to pick
3rd stanza
is a fav

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by HarryHill10/29/12

It's WonderFuckinWoman

References to female figures in the first stanza was (to me) boring and pedantic. but...
very nice write

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by Angeline10/31/12

Wonderful writing

even when you're a bit campy, you use such delightful turns of phrase. Nice to see your poem here, friday. :-)

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