A Stripper is Born

So His sweetie's a stripper ?

I wouldn't say its a death knell for the relationship but definitely a inner warning should be telling the narrator that he better step up his game. It doesn't even matter if you want to stay with a woman who's cool with getting fingered by senior citizens .You want to have choices and options ...like she will.

Good story snippet although I wouldn't call this a actual story. Please cut back on the self pleasuring a tad & extend the next installment. Kidding! ....this is fiction & not sneak peeks from author's journal ( I hope ) .

Quite well written

although, like so many auithors on here, you make the wife sound like a bit of a bimbo. I'll hold off from voting until there's more to judge it on.

I completely understand this

This definitely has the air of authenticity to it. I understand the author's angst. Please keep writing. Well-done.

if my wife was a stripper and broke the rules

the rules are no touching or intercourse in any way she broke them. Being a wife she went past the limits of her job and the marriage i would have kicked her out no money is worth it.

Divorce.

Idiot

You the writer this garbage is pussy puss and unreadable .she be left with many scars too deep to heal if she didn't bleed to death she would never strip again or COUKOO anyone I lost in the Everglades . Death to cheating cunts.

Great story, can't wait to hear more.

Hot & Promising

I like the tease of getting a little surprise revelation, which then leads to a little bigger and unsuspected surprise (at least unsuspected by Hubby, not us jaded readers!) "Oh, by the way, this also happened!" HUHH? Didn't even think THAT would be on the table!

There were several places where critical words were left out, or misstated, which meant backtracking to get back on the right path...a very irritating interruption! Despite that, I gave you 5* (this time!!!) Edit better (yourself or with a volunteer editor)

Come ON, guys!

And if either of the last two commentors were any meaner, they'd qualify as playground bullies... Oh you both WERE playground bullies?... not surprised...

Great story, looking forward to the next part

Will she go all the way?

Jenny certainly did, in real life!

Great picture behind the realty

Many thanks for relating how it would feel to have your wife work in a strip club. Well written and believable. Ignore the negative comments, some people just have no class. I hope you eventually came to accept it, or you will lose her.

Thanks for Feedback

Thanks for the feedback. Those flaming condemnation, well, I get it. This subject aroused strong feelings in me too and as you can tell not all of them were positive. The vitriolic comments, however, I delete because my guess is those reactions say more about some tragedy that unfolded in their lives rather than mine. As for the comment about it being distasteful that her first dance was for an older guy, all I can say it sorry, but I tried my best to tell it how it really happened. It was not a model type 24 year old guy with a giant member...it was just a pervy, older, pretty nice guy. That is who she described, a guy who was a regular at the club....there were subsequent customers, however, who really got her going....

It's all GOOD!

Very well told! Lots of emotion, lots of conflict..., lots of sex. Having enjoyed some of the same type of encounters, I found your telling realistic, easy to read and believe. Willl love reading more. Keep UP the good work.

Good Story

I found the story well written and touched on some of the emotions involved. I would like it a little longer with more about why she was stripping. Financial hardship is hinted at but not fully confirmed. I would also like to have more of what she did at the club, some other men, etc. I gave it 4 stars, though, mostly because I think the author has promise.

Enjoyed the story. I have a similar story, as my wife works one night a week even though we don't need the money. she says it bring out her inner slut. I reap the rewards though.

is there anything hotter than being at home and knowing

being at home and knowing shes naked with men staring at her... its anguish, and humiliating, and so f*ing erotic.

Nice story

I have loved the 3 parts of this story. Is there more coming? I would love to read more about what happened. 5 Stars.

marriage headed for the rocks

If the husband allows this to go on another day, the marriage is over. His wife has danced fully nude, been groped fully nude, and probably had sex with the managers of the dive after hours (which she will tell him in the morning). He has to tell her that if she goes back another night, he will not be there when she comes home. He will also file for divorce because she has chosen a life as a prostitute (her parents will want to know why). It is strange how quickly she has embraced this life style - she needs a good look at reality.

The marriage is still going....and we both still get a rush remembering these days

The marriage is still going and she still cums thinking about these times...we both do.

Oh this is getting good!

Good and hot! Your wife is a very hot woman and obviously loves what she is doing. I know the feeling!

Like someone else said, there are a few places where words were left out or there were some grammar errors but they didn't distract too much from a well told story. Keep going!!

Your wife lets her slut side out

She is cuckolding you in public, stripping and then going with strangers to the rooms for more cuckold fun and soon more than a bit of fingering. Funny she did not get home with a pussy full of hot thick seed for you to eat clean. Even if she quits dancing, she will still play around to get that cock and breeding she needs. No matter if you object or not. She is wild wife now.

just read this again

many sloppy errors, but it does capture the essence of her first night as a stripper and borderline whore. I don't think I really conveyed just how conflicted I was....or how insanely turned on

Very realistic!

Well written account, would love to hear how she progressed?

Remember saying, after my first public striptease: Better than a fuck! Mind you, I got fucked plenty of times after my shows!

I see by your comment, you are trying to say this is a true story.

You have got to be bloody fucking kidding.

"What made me angry was knowing that the managers saw it all happen, knowing they had seen it and I hadn't. "

THAT is what made you mad? Not that she had done it!

I guess the next step is her coming home with her cheating cunt full of cum for you to clean out.

That is if she is not passing her diseases onto yet.

Right now you are just a submissive cuck... how soon until you become nice and sissified wearing frilly knickers and eating cream pie?

Pathetic!