This is an excellent start and I would like to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing.
RecHiker
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Anonymous11/09/12
More and soon
Super stuff...very well written
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Anonymous11/17/12
Great Stuff
Great writing. Keep it short and steady.
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Anonymous11/26/12
Exceptionally good....
Excellent build up to a great story. Wish you never would stop. Please give a little more details to the look and attire of the main protagonist, like very high heels, sexy anklets on one ankle,extremely low waist sari with complete backless blouse on one occasion,maybe get a tattoo or a piercing.....make her a true slut as she is....go on and on with your wonderful narration. Given 5 stars to all installments. I am hooked on to your writing. Don't make us wait a lot on every installments though.
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Anonymous05/06/13
excellent narration
Nice and hot writing. Please write more. I like the way she give her self just for thought not even seeing the person. keep writing.
This story is so realistic, at times it does give the goosebumps.
Would love to read the rest of it!
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Anonymous02/03/14
Please continue
Don't leave us all frustrated like this. I can't wait to find out who this guy is. I thought it was going to be the girl actually. This story is like bad sex................. it left me feeling frustrated. lol
English
More please -
This is an excellent start and I would like to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing.
RecHiker
More and soon
Super stuff...very well written
Great Stuff
Great writing. Keep it short and steady.
Exceptionally good....
Excellent build up to a great story. Wish you never would stop. Please give a little more details to the look and attire of the main protagonist, like very high heels, sexy anklets on one ankle,extremely low waist sari with complete backless blouse on one occasion,maybe get a tattoo or a piercing.....make her a true slut as she is....go on and on with your wonderful narration. Given 5 stars to all installments. I am hooked on to your writing. Don't make us wait a lot on every installments though.
excellent narration
Nice and hot writing. Please write more. I like the way she give her self just for thought not even seeing the person. keep writing.
More needed
This story is so realistic, at times it does give the goosebumps.
Would love to read the rest of it!
Please continue
Don't leave us all frustrated like this. I can't wait to find out who this guy is. I thought it was going to be the girl actually. This story is like bad sex................. it left me feeling frustrated. lol
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