by ALotInCommon
There's a slip up in this story where Lindsey is called Brintney. Britney, from My Sister's Volleyball Thong, also wore tiny dirty pink thongs and played volleyball in high school.
A good start to a story with (I hope) potential. Take your time, enjoy it, we'll enjoy reading it more. A hint... Think about the time you're writing in... The past/present tenses are a bit mixed up.