All Comments on 'Willing Slaves'

by DanielOrme

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
willing slaves

Amazing stuff! Very well written. There should be more stories with black women with white men like this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
I'm impressed!

Well thought out and amazingly decadent. I'm just amazed no one ended up pregnant after a year.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

hmmmm????

not so great,okay start but the guy was a complete ass hole c'mon five women?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Cerebral white MSAale tell a great story!

I truly appreciate a cerebral white male writing this story instead of the same old racist garbage that's constantly submitted (white male rescuing black welfare recipient nonsense)!

The sex was hot...would love more ass spanking, i.e. white hands smacking black asses are hot!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
interesting

I like how this isn't a typical bw/wm story on this site. no pregnancies and nuclear families, even better that there was no racist bullshit. I found it a little unrealitic (come on every woman w/melanin wants to fuck him?) But good considering theShit on this site

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Delightful!

I absolutely loved it. I'm sharing this with my fiancee tonight!

AmaveilAmaveilover 14 years ago
Great. Just Great.

Awesome. You are truly awesome. That's all I can say.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Simply marvelous!!

What a great story, hope to see more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Excellent!

What a well written story, just excellent!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
superb

Sultry and magnificent. A real cock hardener!

wait2playwait2playover 13 years ago
MY cock is so hard it aches,

and I stil want more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Mmmmmmmm

Loved it! Makes me want some white cock for my luscious caramel body!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Excellent

made me wet and slippery!

theognistheognisover 13 years ago
*****

I don't know how this story eluded my attention until now, but it's an excellent, well-written fantasy. Too bad J. Harrington's elixir is only imaginary.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
oh my!

Never have I been so wet in my life reading a story like this. Now if only I could find a white man to ravage my dark chocolate body.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wow

So many ladies who like this... Shame u don't have a white man like me. You should contact me, or leave your contact info. Defenderovheaven@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wow

I was reading this and all I could say was wow!!...I would love to meet a man who would be my slaves... Ilove white men.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Amazing!

This is probably one of the few handfuls of interracial stories that are tasteful! Even though it had a magic potion, it still didn't seen all that unrealistic. Thank you so much for taking the time to share something like this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Fantastic.

Just... just awesome.

GeminiKnightGeminiKnightabout 12 years ago
Very hot

Who is to say that this is not possible? There is so much we don't understand about our world....anyway....with that said this was a very hot story. I've always fantasized about having sex with a black woman and I love these kind of stories. I hope to see more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
ScottsCocoSlave

Cool story. I will HAVE to tell my Owner about this one. Love how the women were different shades from cinnamon to a deep chocolate. Funny how he took all of his slaves away from the hustle & bustles of the states. Away from anyone that would be suspicious as well, I'm sure. Lol. Nice read now I must go for something a little more hardcore to settle me in ;) spread the interracial love & date someone different.Be week & blessed. Kisses & Unity to all

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent! story!

Very believable because,

Once you've had white,

You want it every night

Black women are great! Everyone should own two or three

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Five stars!

Excellent story!

Comentarista82Comentarista82about 8 years ago
Love the idea...

...although it quickly degenerated into (frankly) a group orgy. I initially liked how you stopped him from bilking the cabbie, but there was little inhibition in him lowering the women's inhibitions. He could have romanced them or gotten to know them much better first and that would have made for some really mind-blowing sex. Also, the sex (like how quickly he had each of them) was too rushed, since there's no detailing of their respective sensations.

It's a nice premise, that he wanted to have these black women, but he ends up being no better than a slave master himself.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Yes! Loved it.

bgdick68bgdick68over 5 years ago
Another here

White man who wants a relationship with a black woman. To me, their dark color and exotic looks make them so attractive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Want to hate this...really really bad

I really wanted to hate this starting off with the glossing over of the brutality of slavery pissed me off but you did something really interesting here. Even given that this was written so long ago and given the time period we are in now but it was actually still a pretty good read. I think I liked the idea of this guy seemingly living out his fantasy and making it a strange reality, no shame no regrets just living it out. Also, kind of a heady read that makes you ask racial questions and what would happen "if', especially at is concerns the ideas of privilege.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
THIS STORY CONTINUES WITH

... A Very Strange E-Mail (chapter 2)

Charli and Bobby (chapter 3)

Let's Make A Deal (chapter 5)

all by JonB1969

I did not find chapter 4. Maybe there is no chapter 4.

Paul in Oklahoma

DanielOrmeDanielOrmeover 5 years agoAuthor
ATTN Paul in Oklahoma (if you return here)

Chapter 4 is my story, "Free." Just click on my name and it's there with my stories.

erebustitan43erebustitan43over 4 years ago
I found it excellent.

For those of you not into actually reading history, only 3% of the White Men in the Americas owned slaves, not just African slaves were owned. Orientals, Native American though short lived, Irish, Scottish, were also slaves.

So, NO, Africans were NOT at all the only slaves, between 1100 and 1900.

Yes, Tribal Africans betrayed their own families and Tribes and sold their own people to the Dutch, Arabs and Orientals.

So, get over the "hate all white people" for the problems YOUR own ancestors caused.

I love history.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice Story

Keep on Writing .. I wonder how many of the Ladies end up Pregnant ??

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77about 2 years ago

All that excessive sex but no babies? Boo! Coulda been a 5, but 4...

bucco40bucco40over 1 year ago

Should have added some girl on girl stuff in while waiting on cock. Incest could be added to spice it up. Also, get some of their gorgeous black asses.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Wow, you put my fantasy into words! Wonderful story, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

THat was so hot! Great job

DaddywantsmilkDaddywantsmilkabout 2 months ago

Great story but it would have been better if they had all ended up pregnant to him.

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