All Comments on 'Kinetic: The First Alliance Ch. 01 Pt. 02'

im interested, but the parts are way to short....

I know you have done it on purpose however, calling something a chapter then giving it a sub-chapter or part denotes the length of the story... so I am not that dissapointed

I think I will come back and read Ch1 when its finished, for now, your author page has been bookmarked

Other human espers, alliances, relationships, rivalries, villains

Previous poster has good ideas, but if you do decide to use those ideas make sure that your original story does deviate from the original plot that YOU want to write.