All Comments on 'Uncle Charles'

by MaryR

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazingly Erotic

I had a hard on after the first 5 paragraphs and it just got better and better. I cant wait for the continuation as there are so many ways it can go.

It looks as if Wendy's mother knows more than she is telling.

Little John

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Well Done!

Left me needing fresh batteries - please hurry with the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hmmm

So it should be obvious that he is really her father right? Nice start... I'd like to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
interesting

what are your plans? very interesting to see where you go with this. thanks

GrampervGrampervover 11 years ago
Randy

It wasn't just Uncle Charles with a bulge in his trousers. I had one too. Mary hit the spot with this one and I'm afraid I made just as big a mess as Charles. More, please more.

Edison3wireEdison3wireover 11 years ago
VERY NICE

It was probably a blessing in disguise

that Wendy could not live at her mums

flat as it was too small but Uncle Charles

was big, his flat that is! But in a short time

Wendy found uncle to be big as well. A fine

story, I loved reading it. Thanks Mary R.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story

Good story is there another chapter to come?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More please

Very arousing,,,,looking forward to more chapters,,,

PaulsomPaulsomover 11 years ago
Nice dialogue

Wendy was very obliging. A good girl.

WobieTideWobieTidealmost 9 years ago
Sexy!

Sexy, titillating, teasing, just about everything a good erotic story should be. I love the way you set the mood and would give anything to have a niece, cousin, friend like Wendy. Love the dirty chat as she let him see her 'secret' while he wanked... great... just great!

bawdi1bawdi1almost 8 years ago
Fantastic Fantasy!

What a great start to what I am sure will be an awesome trilogy with Uncle Charles and the lovely Wendy, this uncle also had a huge tent as Wendy teased, but I wasn't quick enough with the handkerchief!!! lol can't wait to read the next parts, thanks MaryR x

RegretsRegretsabout 7 years ago
A really wonderful story with no threat or dicordance

I loved the story. I would like a paragraph amended:where Uncle says to Wendy : I won't be charging you rent.I would like it better if he added that he would instead be paying Wendy an allowance for helping in the house

And this, so that we really do feel that she has done well for herself.

It's just such a good illustration of how two people who know a bit about life can help each other out

The atmosphere created, lovely warm house, comfort and privacy and happiness within is just wonderful and deserves to be more widely read. How long before a woman's magazine like cosmopolitan wakes up and features MaryR to bring a smile to its many readers.

Obviously Mother can not be left alone with Dad and should visit quite often to care for this bigger house.

beachbum1958beachbum1958almost 7 years ago
Where are you, Mary?

I love all your writing, but then you knew that already. All I really wanted to say is you've been absent from this stage far too long, we need your gentle brand of eroticism and narrative clarity here, and I wish you'd come back soon.

Miss you loads,

Will

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