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A Caged Bird Sings Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by pampywampy11/03/12

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would love to serve a life sentence in that prison

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by Barnabe9311/04/12

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Agree with the previous comment. T_T

I need that in my lifeee!

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by thatlonewolf11/04/12

feedback N shit

Very good sequel, liked it a lot
i like the fact that your characters have a lot of depth (right word?) like the inner conflicts of Odessa and the reactions of her friends, feels like it's straight out of a soap and that's a good thing, the way you describe her thoughts and feelings and the way it develops, it touches one

I'm wondering how Odessa/prisha will develop, your hints are/feel huge, like giant paintings on the wall, that only we can see and not the characters
also great sex scenes of course, the initiation kinda surprised me, as i was reading i always expected something else, not that i think that much when reading, just enjoying the ride.

ow and one more, small thing, could you - in future chapters - tell us and Odessa, what those unspoken rules are? what's the difference between love and sex acts? when is one appropriate and such?
I am quite ... fascinated by your storylines, if i may say so

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by shijujohn11/06/12

Luv ur stories.....

Please write more stories. Stories about mature shemale fucking Mature women, lesbian would be equally good. I love all your stories. You are a good writer can't wait long to read your stories
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by shijujohn11/06/12

my mail id

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by Anonymous10/11/13

Your one sick, fucking disgusting little freak.

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by Tru_Saffron10/29/13

so...

I enjoy the story but the whole swapping cum from my to mouth then adding butt juice to the mix sort of made me gag..... literally. I had to stop reading to allow my tummy to settle lol
It would've been just as profound if they all came in her mouth, then she just swallowed....... buuuuuut I'm sure others enjoyed it. I just felt like sharing my misery of that particular segment and good job on the rest.. :)

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by Anonymous02/09/14

Keep it going

Very good keep up the good work and please continue this series

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by Anonymous02/14/14

I want more

The cum swapping was so sexy, even more so when you added her ass into it. Please do more!

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by Anonymous11/16/14

Better and better!

I didn't think I'd ever be so turned on when it came to cum swapping. Well you changed that today.

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by Randee195803/28/16

Edge of my seat.😉

My exuberance over the patience you have taken with this emotional creation is so revealing. What happened to 4,5,6,? 😢

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