Fall Fell

Nicely worded!

No stopping time...

interesting

There is something about this that I really like. It is accessible without being obvious. The line breaks are really interesting and (for me at least) unexpected. The image of scrambling for a dime is a nice link back to the desperation of staving off winter, and burning a dime is an interesting twist of meaning.

You are very good

with this short poem where no words are wasted and the composition forces a careful read that breaks on the two key words: Summer and Winter. Nice work. :-)

who am i to argue

with ang and des
5ed of course
eol is counter-intuitive,
but as ang forces the key words