You were taking me back to the good ol'days were I use to be a waitress,although I did not anyone to the extreme like your Mr.Blue eyes here,but I some interesting customers, and awful tippers.
P.S Great first start I would like to know more about these two.
Glad Kiana had some backbone to tell Mr. Blue eyes off...lol I can't image dealing with costumers like that I think I would have threw the drink on him : ) but at the same time I can't totally fault him because I don't know where the memo came from that "bad/rude/cocky" behavior is a sexy these days. Great start can't wait to see where this goes.
so being a total dick and demanding her number or he will have her fired is the way to love now? sounds like a way to get a sexual harrassment complaint.
Thank you for making her stand up to him. It seems here on Literotica that the heroines always give in without a fight, which gets kind of annoying. Make him work for it!!!
I love that she called him out on his rudeness! Let him work for it girl. I have been checking each night for chapter 2!!! Keep it coming...it's good; captured me from JUMP!
I used to work at hooters and it seemed like the guy managers were always assholes and at least 5 times a month you get a guy that hassles you , treats you like shit, and makes your life hell for an hour (hours longer if he is there for a game) then expects you to fall all over him because he asked for your number.I can't wait for the rest please please hurry
What a pompous ass! LoL, to think she'd give him the time of day after such rude arrogance.
Can't wait to read the next chapters, will be interesting to see where this goes.
I don't know why she would give him the time of day. She seems like she's got enough guts to call his bluff on the threats. Don't make her weak and find her a better guy!
this girl rules and ive always wanted to work for hooters but where i lived they closed bummer but anyways im loving this story and its just the first chapter thank you so much
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Good Start
I like the beginning of this story. Keep it going....
Interesting
This has been a great read so far. Keep going!
PLEASE!!!!
Please finish this story!!~
I love it so far...
Can't wait to read more!
Very nice...
I'm liking this story- nice job. Curious to know more about Blue Eyes. :) Can't wait to read the next chapter.
-p2p
I Love It!
When can we get another update? I like the concept of this story! Please finish this story!
*****
Exceptional.
Five.
i lov this story
This story has a pretty good start. Keep it up
Excellent Outline of Interpersonal / Vocational Dynamics interspersed with rapid serve and volley dialogue !
These 2 are both worthy foes err potential lovers. The author keeps things moving & steers clear of mushy ruts that can bog these stories down.
Great!
Love the story line please update soon.
Love It.
This one is definitely going in my favorites, can't wait for the next submission!
Very Good.
Now this I like. Looking forward to the next chapter.
A great post and thank you.
awesome
Great start. Please update soon
This first chapter
has me hooked. I should be in bed sleeping, but here I am reading your work. Great job. I love the chemistry and I can't wait for the next chapter.
lol.
You were taking me back to the good ol'days were I use to be a waitress,although I did not anyone to the extreme like your Mr.Blue eyes here,but I some interesting customers, and awful tippers.
P.S Great first start I would like to know more about these two.
Now Kiana just need to tell Eric off but she need to find anither job first. Why is he always being an asshole? Is he jealous of her?
Sawyer need to leave Kiana a big tip for all the trouble he caused.
Hooked already!
Glad Kiana had some backbone to tell Mr. Blue eyes off...lol I can't image dealing with costumers like that I think I would have threw the drink on him : ) but at the same time I can't totally fault him because I don't know where the memo came from that "bad/rude/cocky" behavior is a sexy these days. Great start can't wait to see where this goes.
10 stars
Great start. Can't wait to read more . :)
so being a total dick and demanding her number or he will have her fired is the way to love now? sounds like a way to get a sexual harrassment complaint.
Can't wait!
Thank you for making her stand up to him. It seems here on Literotica that the heroines always give in without a fight, which gets kind of annoying. Make him work for it!!!
A Great Start!
This is the first story I have read of yours...and you are good at setting a scene...look forward to more...!
hot Start
Nice Refreshing and new...... keep it going!
Great start!!!!
I agree with islandqt......make him work for it.
I like where this is going.
Geez, this guy is an ass! Make him crawl! Good start!
OMG Incredible he thought acting like that was gonna get him a number please!! Looking forward to see what will happen next thanks!!
Great
Great start!! Cannot wait for more. I hope you do weekly updates, lol!
wtf
ppl are saying they love it but the ratings are so low!! Anywho, good job, 5 from me
Great start :)
Cant wait to seee how there first time having sex will be lik. Nice begining.
GOT ME HOOKED!
I love that she called him out on his rudeness! Let him work for it girl. I have been checking each night for chapter 2!!! Keep it coming...it's good; captured me from JUMP!
Likes this a lot!!!!
Baby-
Don"t tease and make us wait too long for the next chapter. This is hot and spicy so dish it up soon.
More
Good story
Love the story waiting for more...
YAY!
YAY I LOVE IT DON'T LET IT GO DOWNHILL NOW! :D
LOVE IT and been there
I used to work at hooters and it seemed like the guy managers were always assholes and at least 5 times a month you get a guy that hassles you , treats you like shit, and makes your life hell for an hour (hours longer if he is there for a game) then expects you to fall all over him because he asked for your number.I can't wait for the rest please please hurry
Laughable
What a pompous ass! LoL, to think she'd give him the time of day after such rude arrogance.
Can't wait to read the next chapters, will be interesting to see where this goes.
Umm, are we expected to like this jerk?
I don't know why she would give him the time of day. She seems like she's got enough guts to call his bluff on the threats. Don't make her weak and find her a better guy!
hey. just found this story.
Really liked chapter 1 so far, I like the women, she's got sass. The guy seems like a real bastard. Can't wait to finish reading this story
lol
to funny i was crying and laughing at the same time i love this story and i just start reading it
WOW
this girl rules and ive always wanted to work for hooters but where i lived they closed bummer but anyways im loving this story and its just the first chapter thank you so much
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