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by Anonymous

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by NSSurfer11/05/12

What was she wearing

You changed what she was wearing from cuyoff jean shorts and tank to to Pencil skirt and blouse. Makes for a lousy story

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by Anonymous11/05/12

AND I DON'T CARE EITHER!!!

FIND A HOBBY THAT YOU'RE BETTER AT . . . BUT DEFINITELY NOT WRITING!

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by Anonymous11/05/12

DELETE THE TRASH

way to much like nonconsent/reluctance. if you need to write trash keep it to yourself or use the nonconsent area.

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by mcbtws11/06/12

Call WasteManagement

To pick up this garbage.

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by Anonymous11/06/12

Pile of shit.

Said she was in her mid thirties? Then changed a sentence later to 40's? Lol.

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