All Comments on 'At Long Last: Gwen'

by Bedu

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
At Long Last : Gwen

possitively one of the best well written knowledgeable. Good grasp of old men and thier thought patterns. Sexy showing how older men have learned to use all thier talents to drive women crazy weith lust Thanks for the lovely read it was a delight keep them cumming lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice story

Nice story, please don't wait another 5 years to write again.

elrayo41elrayo41over 9 years ago
Excellent FANTASY

CONGRATULATIONS. This is an excellent fantasy that could be outstanding with a little attention to word selection. "Laid" is past tense of the transitive verb "to lay" and stomach is an organ of the digestive system. these little hiccups take the reader out of the page and ruin the fictive dream. Other than that your characters are likeable and interesting. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good Setting

Much like the annual conferences in my field. I do find it odd that an unmarried man would have himself snipped.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Love this still, good read.

good comfy sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I love the atmosphere

Tbe conversafions remind me of the atmospheres among academics (which was a VERY long time ago for me. )

It's tough to write a novel in a couple of pages so plot development has to be rushed.

Well done

Thank you Bedu

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Interesting.

A good start, then skip dinner for a fuck a thon. I was looking forward to sparkling repartee at dinner.

But, very enjoyable. So far....

Ravey19Ravey198 months ago

Fast, maybe too fast, but very enjoyable. Loved the repartee between Will and Gwen as she gained confidence.

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