A very nice story. I think it got at the kind of tension that can naturally build up in some relationships. Interesting the daughter wanted intercourse, rather than giving oral, but I think its b/c her desire had been delayed so long
Thought the last comment was interesting. Does anyone think a girl would want to do oral first or only for their dad?
Truly one if the best stories I've seen here in quite. The tension, the desire, the need are palpable throughout. I can't wait to read more if your work.
Of heat and affection. Well written and paced with plenty of action. Please keep sharing your talent with us.
My ONLY complaint!
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