i usually like it when there is more cat-and-mouse tension and build up before they act on their incestuous passion, but this was a good story nonetheless!
that you write a pre-quel. The first time she noticed him, the first flash, etc. This might have been a fair-to-good part 2, but not enough build up.
Another great story...keep 'em coming...love it.
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i usually like it when there is more cat-and-mouse tension and build up before they act on their incestuous passion, but this was a good story nonetheless!
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that you write a pre-quel. The first time she noticed him, the first flash, etc. This might have been a fair-to-good part 2, but not enough build up.
Very Good!
Another great story...keep 'em coming...love it.
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