I have no time for the contempt shown by Don. Small man fights back I suppose. Should lose the chip on his shoulder. Not very hip at all, imho
Seemed a pretty hot encounter until Don turned into a total bastard, for no apparent reason I could perceive. If the next chapter is just more of his abuse, think I'll skip it.
I don't understand why he made her take a cab, why is he mad?
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What an arsehole!
I have no time for the contempt shown by Don. Small man fights back I suppose. Should lose the chip on his shoulder. Not very hip at all, imho
Went off the rails
Seemed a pretty hot encounter until Don turned into a total bastard, for no apparent reason I could perceive. If the next chapter is just more of his abuse, think I'll skip it.
ending was weird
I don't understand why he made her take a cab, why is he mad?
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