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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
WHATSOEVER COULD LAY BENEATH

with hopes it is a winner, TK U MLJ LV NV

Naughtily_WrittenNaughtily_Writtenover 11 years agoAuthor
@tazz317

Thank you so much! Much appreciated!

njoyjadenjoyjadeover 11 years ago
Gave me tingles!

Perfect title for sensual, romantic and erotic poetry. Thank you, Sir, may I have another. (poem that is :) )

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

What lies beneath is plain to see. But to touch, to taste, to smell, to hear their passionate cries, brings out the sexual beast, just like reading this erotic piece.

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