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Ode to Ether

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by Anonymous

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by tazz31711/04/12

A LONG GONE NEIGHBOR

is fondly remembered and thought of...TK U MLJ LV NV

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by njoyjade11/08/12

"We find the beauty in them all."

Very nice poem.
Intensity radiates through the metamorphosis. :)

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by Cinner12/09/12

The rhyme

My ONLY critiques of this poem is that I wouldn't have used the word "confused" twice in two lines, and rhymed "confused" with "used" in line three. Beyond that, this is at your usual standard of elegance and sophistication. I'm becoming a genuine fan of your work!

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by Butterflies51212/14/12

You sound like either someone I know or someone I should know...

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