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Of course I'm going to comment.
At what point is this love? Sure they get along and probably like each other; but love? I don't see any of that.
Getting There!
Enjoying the story and the emotions the hubby is feeling
Great story!!
Please don't wait so long for chapter 3.
Reply to HarryinVA
Paraphrasing the writer of Twelfth Night: "Some are born assholes, some achieve assholeness, and others have the status of asshole thrust upon them." Which of these explains you, Harry?
Readers with Tunnel Vision
There's just black & white in the world. Gray doesn't exist!
Or
The Bible says.....
Would this not be better recieved in Fetish?
I personally could care less where you post this becuase it is really not my cup of tea. But why would the author subject himself to all the negative lunatics in Loving Wives knowing this is going to happen? Pretty well written but like someone said like watching a train wreck.Good Luck
Delay Effects?
Well, it is fairly clear that the delay in posting Ch2 was NOT due to careful editing!
Was Gordo# not clear enough? It seems like the author is using a voice recognition application on his oral statements. Those are notorious (still) for screwing up homophones, or near homophones, like 'common' and 'come on' - they are better than they once were, mainly due to grammar checking, but are not yet perfect.
Read the material after some delay, and TRY to misunderstand it. If the author can, then many readers WILL! Read every word! Don't speed read it - knowing what is coming - else missing words STAY missing!
nice story ignore the negative comments
Perfect for this category. Ignore all the comments from the insecure.
Fantasy to Reality
I enjoyed this story's progression from fantasy to reality where a loving, married couple's relationship is evolving, which is allowed to happen through their open communication from a secure foundation. It is interesting that the people who have taken the time to read this story and left negative responses do seem to some degree to be insecure...did they not know what kind of story they were reading, this was part 2...why bother to purposely read this knowing in advance they were going to be irritated? Please keep writing this unfolding story.
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About as entertaining as a kick in the gonads oh sorry you do think that's fun
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