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Elizabeth's Eyes, Heart, and Soul

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by HarryHill11/09/12

Like the first two stanza

would suggest a little rearanging here in the first
..
How pretty (once she) must have been,
In comparison, (all) others pale.

the second is perfect
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by tazz31711/12/12

PEOPLE WHO ADMIRE AND LOVE OTHERS

keeps the others beauty and self living TK U MLJ LV NV

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